We Sing a Song of Hope

Vs 1
When life becomes clouded
with worries and fears
We find ourselves grieving
in sorrow and tears

Vs 2
The burdens we carry,
too heavy a load
and shadows surround us
down dark winding roads

       Chorus ~
       There's a gift God gives to us
       with merciful love
       It's a lambent glow, a light.
       Hope's threads are of gold
       meant to mend broken hearts
       sent from God above
       It's a lambent glow,  a light
       always burning bright

Vs 3
Have faith in God's power
To bring peace of mind
Be courageous and brave
For hope is divined

Vs 4
Do not be discouraged
Hope conquers despair
With blessings upon us
God answers our prayer

       Chorus ~
       There's a gift God gives to us
       with merciful love
       It's a lambent glow, a light.
       Hope's threads are of gold
       meant to mend broken hearts
       sent from God above
       It's a lambent glow,  a light
       always burning bright

Vs 5
When trouble arises
We're wary of harm
Remember that hope brings
us comfort and calm

       Chorus ~
       There's a gift God gives to us
       with merciful love
       It's a lambent glow, a light.
       Hope's threads are of gold
       meant to mend broken hearts
       sent from God above
       It's a lambent glow,  a light
       always burning bright

       A lambent glow, our guiding light
       always burning bright



*Lyrics intended to coincide with the melody of 'Chariots of Fire.'

~ A Song of Hope Poetry Contest
Sponsored by John Hamilton
Posted on July 25th, 2020 ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kelly Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 5:07 AM
Jenna, it's a difficult thing to do -pen lyrics to a well known musical piece , but you certainly nailed this one ! I am also annoyed that you've been trolled by some Knobhead or other here. Don't let "the odd brain-dead-oddball" drag you down. Overall the group are sincere and genuine. BUT there are those whose criticisms exceed their own writing ability , Seán ... Write onnnnn
Edmonds  Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 8:20 PM
A beautiful song Jenna, so deserving of your top win, congratulations. Belle
Logan Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 1:07 PM
Thank you so much, Belle.
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 1:48 PM
Congrats on your top win! Great write and perfectly matched!
Logan Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 1:06 PM
I appreciate your kind remarks, Krish.
Devonshire Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 10:30 AM
Hope truly is a gift from God, Jenna. Congratulations on your top win with this beautiful entry! Best wishes, Carolyn
Logan Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 1:06 PM
Thanks so very much, Carolyn.
Mishra Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 6:18 AM
This is a beautiful lyrical melody Jenna. Congratulations on your win :)
Logan Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 7:14 AM
Thank you for the acknowledgement, Aditi.
Ibeh Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 4:58 AM
Such an excellent write, Jenna:-) Heartiest congrats on your win!
Logan Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 5:41 AM
Thanks so much for visiting my lyrics, Edward. Thank you.
Dutta Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 9:49 PM
Congrats Jenna to win First place. Blessing
Logan Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 5:40 AM
Thank you for the kind words, Anisha. I'll be by to read your winning poem soon.
Poteet Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 8:26 PM
Nice, Jenna, I commend your skill in meter and rhyme. Congrats on a fine example of Christian song of hope. Kudos on your win.
Logan Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 5:38 AM
Thank you for the generous comments, Reason, and sharing the honor with your song of hope is a pleasure.
Watt Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 8:15 PM
Hearty congratulations, my friend! Your #1 win was well deserved. A poetic blessing saturated with hope. ~ John
Logan Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 5:37 AM
Thank you, John, and I'm honored to share that spot with you. We have so many blessings to be grateful for.
Hamilton Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 7:01 PM
This is what I was hoping for an excellent write Jenna, flowed perfectly to the cadence of the song, thanks for this excellent entry and congrats on another top win!
Logan Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 5:35 AM
To write for your contest was a pleasure, giving many of us a venue to sing songs of hope. Your gift of a placement to us is the reward. Thank you very much, John.
Watt Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 10:48 AM
Jenna, lovely lyrics of faith in God and the hope and light he provides in our times of sorrow and darkness. I think this should do well in the Hope contest, it's a winner in my book ~ John
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 4:04 AM
Thank you very much, John. I've read your poetry, and know your remarks are faith based.
Romios Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 7:02 AM
This is a treasure beyond measure! Panagiota xx
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 4:02 AM
Thank you for such a nice comment about these lyrics, Panagiota.
Lane Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 6:06 AM
Jenna, Your lyrics are a beautiful testament to the power of hope and the gift our Father has so mercifully given us.
Logan Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 3:53 PM
Thank you very much for appreciating my lyrics, Lin.
Koplin Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:05 AM
Well done Jenna!! That is beautiful and very uplifting. A fav for me. A work of art to be proud of.
Logan Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Thank you so much, Mark, and I appreciate the fav. Hope gives us strength in any situation.
Allison Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 9:51 AM
oh Jenna this poem of hope is a joy to read, did you use Chariots of fire as an inspiration as the first stanza definitely fits to that tune, would love to hear this set to music! A HUGE winner in my book and into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 10:11 AM
Yes, I did write it to coincide with Chariots of Fire. I think I'll make a note of that on the bottom. Thanks for mentioning it, and as well for your generous compliments, Jan!
Gondolf Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 7:51 AM
A beautiful song with a beautiful message, Jenna. This poem has such a nice flow to it and I notice the perfect meter. This is a winner in my books my friend. Hugs, John
Logan Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 10:09 AM
Oh my, John, I'm so happy that you think the flow and meter are ok. I would be honored if it places in the contest. Thanks so very much~and hugs back to you.
Cunningham Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 6:50 AM
Beautifully composed Jenna, indeed a hymn of hope. Hope you're weekend is going well Good luck in the contest Tom
Logan Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 10:07 AM
Good day to you, Tom, and a big 'thank you' for the kind thoughts you've given these lines.
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