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Fragmented Verse
Invented by Constance La France,  verse only no rhyme. Left align
12 lines,  broken down into 4 stanzas, includes indentation on some lines
Indented lines are- line 3- 26 spaces/line 4- 28 spaces/ line 9 &10 -8 spaces/ 11&12-  26spaces/28spaces. Line 9 and 10 - form a question ?
Syllables- 12/10/4/4  12/10/10/12  8/8  4/4

Despite our differences, we're very much the same
trying to harmonize faith with our fate.
                          We live to die,
                            it is our way. 

We are all sentient, intelligent beings
aware of feelings of joy, hurt and pain.
And when hope suppresses our selfish ways,
we also experience emotions of love.

        Is fear the force that divides us
        as suspicion keeps us apart?

                          We’re so alike,
                            we share a heart!

(Fragmented Verse)
Mar. 14, 2019

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Date: 3/14/2019 6:09:00 PM
Yes, Emile, it is fear that divides us and keeps us apart. And I agree we "share a heart"; I call Him God. Nice one!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/15/2019 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Caren, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.