We see it now

The flame of awareness is held by God,
who is distanced from soul by the ego,
so to awaken in mind-body pod,
all beliefs and concepts, we must let go,
shifting into silence in stillness slow.
When released from fetters of lower mind,
on shifting to the heart, loving and kind,
garnering clear sight, we see our own light,
which always was but to it we were blind;
how our aura glows, radiant pure white!
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Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 11:44 AM
I really like the dizain form you used for this gem.
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February 23, 2025 at 5:58 PM
Thank you, Andrea. If we look at Rhyme Royal, it is actually a Dizain finished off in 7 lines, instead of 10, so which of the two forms is employed probably depends upon the speed at which the idea of the poem is conveyed or perhaps the mood of the moment.
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