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We Never Know

We never know when life will end And so each day we just pretend That we have all the time to spend On all that we envision. The trips someone would recommend, The get-togethers with a friend, The shows and games we should attend - We plan them with precision. Yet circumstances often bend And goals or travels we’d intend To take, we somehow comprehend Will bow to indecision. Our years on earth, though, won’t extend. There is no magic dividend And, like this poem that I have penned, There’ll be no great revision.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 4/9/2024 1:02:00 PM
Nothing remains of anyone’s fleeting good times. Collecting good times gets a person nowhere. Collections of good deeds accompanies a person into their future. YouTube has videos of Coney Island in about 1910 with masses of people having fun galore. They’re all gone.
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Date: 3/24/2024 5:41:00 PM
Wow, wow, wow. Some amazing rhyming here ilene. Loved it. And the context of this poem is right up my ally. :)
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Date: 3/10/2024 1:54:00 PM
A excellent poem Ilene on our vulnerability in this life especially us senior folk Ha…..A reminder to grasp and do what we want as time is precious and there is no extension! Loved it…..Debx
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Date: 3/9/2024 1:28:00 PM
So very sadly true. I have decided never to travel again due to discomfort I now have simply standing or walking. Amazingly, we are the only humans in the sum of the world's total population to be living in general past age 18. We sure take a lot for granted!
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Date: 3/7/2024 2:02:00 PM
I don't think it needs any "revision", Ilene. But, doesn't not knowing what the end will be make the getting there all the more interesting? This is a really good one.
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Date: 3/6/2024 4:59:00 PM
Ha. I liked that last line best.. Poem is a great read.
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Date: 3/6/2024 4:33:00 PM
Dear Ilene, your your amazing poem is filled with the truth of life's unpredictability. Your verses encapsulate the essence of living in the moment and cherishing each day as it comes, for tomorrow is never promised. The eloquence of your words serves as a gentle guide to embrace the present and make the most of every opportunity. A wonderful Poem. - Blessings, Daniel
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