We Need a New God

It does not matter how much I pray
God does not give me the time of day
That "omnipotent" snot
Did not try to save squat
When my iPhone drowned yesterday!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Deo Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 9:12 AM
thanx Rico; He knew you would write ... & think...pray. (He is omniscient, too. What a bummer!!) shalom/Aloha in the love of Awanawilona and Great Spirit. CARES4US
Rowe Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 7:35 PM
Such a clever, unexpected twist ending. Well done, my friend.
Leffanta Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 4:44 PM
Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 5:39 PM
I lose stuff constantly. I need to find which angel watches over people who tend to lose things!! Love the ending on this one.
Leffanta Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 4:45 PM
Does Saint Christopher cover that? Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico
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