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We need a new God

It does not matter how much I pray God does not give me the time of day That "omnipotent" snot Did not try to save squat When my iPhone drowned yesterday!

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Date: 9/8/2018 9:12:00 AM
thanx Rico; He knew you would write ... & think...pray. (He is omniscient, too. What a bummer!!) shalom/Aloha in the love of Awanawilona and Great Spirit. CARES4US
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Date: 9/7/2018 7:35:00 PM
Such a clever, unexpected twist ending. Well done, my friend.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/8/2018 4:44:00 PM
Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico
Date: 9/7/2018 5:39:00 PM
I lose stuff constantly. I need to find which angel watches over people who tend to lose things!! Love the ending on this one.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/8/2018 4:45:00 PM
Does Saint Christopher cover that? Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico