Notes About The Poem
This is a surprise for Becca Teagan, based on her poem "I Met him in a dream" This is a collaboration surprise! I took her poem, split it into verses, and then provided after each verse the male version. Hope you like it Becca!!!
We Met In a Dream
In a dream, I went to him
Hidden inside a wispy night
Stars shining their twinkle lights
I sneaked into his slumbered thoughts
In a dream, I went over to her
Hidden inside a sultry night
Stars shining, their erotic lights
I snuck into her dream world dark
Of silken skin, my auburn tresses
Flowed like satin around his face
He stirred, he trembled as I traced
My finger on his lips, his cheek
Of silken skin and her auburn hair
Flowing like honeydew around her face
She stirred and trembled as I traced
My fingers all over her bodice in lace
He opened his eyes to realize
I’m not a ghostly apparition
I’m that dream that he’s been dreaming
His temptress, angel - his anything
She opened her eyes as she surmised
I’m not the phantom of her sensual nights
I’m that dream that lives in her heart
Her knight and savoir, that’s just the start
In my dream, I danced for him
Gracefully and unashamed
Illumined by a candle’s flame
Exposed before him as he stared
In my dream, she danced and swayed
Gracefully, unabashed nor ashamed
Illuminated by the candles flickering flame
Exposed before me, such pleasures to delight
I watched his eyes as they devoured
Mesmerized with every move
He tried in vain to speak my name
Pleading with those smoldering eyes
I stared into her eyes as they devoured
I, mesmerized with her dancing eyes
She tried in vain to shout out my name
Pleading with those melancholy eyes
As I seduced and tantalized
My soft, feminine, sensual power
Brought him to his knees
In helpless desire
She seduced and tantalized
Her white lace and sensual prowess
I was conquered and on my knees
Helpless to her magical touch
In my dream, he couldn’t move
Motionless, a man in chains
Powerless as I came near
I laid my breath upon his skin
In my dream, she silently lay
Motionless, enticing my desires
Powerless as I knelt before her charm
I laid my kiss upon her sweet moist lips
As I breathed in to know his scent
The mix of pheromones and cologne
Made me lose my self-control
Tasting him with every kiss
As I was consumed by her flowers scent
Rapture mixed with perfume brought my descent
I have lost all self control
Tasting her with kisses my only goal
Loving him with every touch
Taken by his solid form
'Twas in this dream that I discovered
I have no desire for another
Loving her with every touch
Taken by her seductive sways
Twas in this dream my heart rests sure
I have no desire, for any other
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