We Made a Wish Premiere Contest Winner


We watched the colors change the sky,
and stretched our backs against the grass
Each cloud became a butterfly.
as twilight's crimson came to pass.
The heavens turned to splendid glass.

There, beyond the dying sun,
a wish was waiting to be free.
The curtains spread, a star was hung,
so, you pointed to the galaxy,
to give my wish to me.


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7/12/16
Crimson Contest: 
Resubmitted for Brian's Contest: #227

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/25/2016 3:08:00 AM
Congrats Carrie, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 10/24/2016 1:01:00 PM
Dear Carrie, lovely!..congrats on your top placement in the contest , pointed to galaxy!loved it//love,Anu:)
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Date: 7/18/2016 10:22:00 AM
Carrie, beautiful...congrats on your placement in the contest lady :)-luloo
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Date: 7/16/2016 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie, a wish for all your wishes..
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Date: 7/15/2016 11:20:00 PM
Wonderful idea and great wish...I think of those falling in the darkness of despair. great words! You deserve the Win. Congrats. :) Sunita.
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Date: 7/15/2016 10:49:00 PM
Congrats on your top win....beautiful lines..
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Date: 7/15/2016 10:34:00 PM
Congrats on winning the Make a Wish contest - beautifully composed! Jesse
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Date: 7/15/2016 9:40:00 PM
Hi Carrie, Congrats on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/15/2016 9:37:00 PM
Very nice Carrie and a well deserved top spot.
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Date: 7/15/2016 8:38:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on 1st place with this smooth flowing, romantic write! Excellent!
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Date: 7/14/2016 1:33:00 PM
Beautiful poem in the contest my lovely smiling friend. Good luck. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/12/2016 1:38:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful lines Carrie, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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