We Lost More Than a Dad

We lost more than just a Dad that day
We lost half of how we came to be
We lost we four girls first love
We lost our Best Friend

We lost more than just a Dad that day
Our Mom lost her Soul Mate, Her other half 
Our children lost their Papaw
We lost our family’s foundation 
We lost the glue that held us together

We lost more than just a Dad that day
We lost the Strongest man we ever knew 
We lost the man we looked up too
We lost we four girls Teacher of many things

We lost more than just a Dad that day
We four girls lost our Hero
We lost some of our Light
We lost part of our Heart
We lost part of our Soul

We lost more than just a Dad that day
We lost some of our Courage
We lost some of our Strength
We lost some of our will to fight back
We lost some of our will to carry on
We four girls lost more than a Dad
We lost more than just a Dad that day

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Date: 1/13/2016 1:01:00 AM
Sabrina, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA ~
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 1/13/2016 1:52:00 AM
Thank you!*hugs*
Date: 1/10/2016 10:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the Dad Contest! Thanks for sharing with us.
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 1/11/2016 2:15:00 AM
Thank you for reading.
Date: 1/9/2016 1:21:00 AM
Congratulations!!! Well-deserved win!! :)
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 1/10/2016 7:05:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/6/2016 12:01:00 PM
Sabrina, Congratulations on your win, in Judy Konos Dad contest. Love **SKAT**
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 1/8/2016 12:28:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/6/2016 5:29:00 AM
All of what he was is still here... in you four girls.
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 1/8/2016 12:30:00 AM
I try to remind myself of that everyday. Thank you!
Date: 1/5/2016 8:47:00 PM
Oh but what you have will never be lost. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 1/6/2016 12:16:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/5/2016 4:01:00 PM
Thank you for being in my contest. I have an idea that your Dad is in Heaven with the Lord and keeps watch over you. The next time you go outside "Look Up" and wave , "Hi Dad!" I do it all the time..
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 1/6/2016 12:27:00 AM
Thank you for it! I speak to mine all the time too! Especially each time my son goes out the door.
Date: 6/16/2014 7:57:00 PM
:)
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Date: 6/14/2014 11:21:00 PM
thank you for the comment on my comment
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 6/16/2014 2:16:00 AM
Your welcome.
Date: 6/12/2014 10:28:00 AM
Wow! You really poured your heart into this one.. Beautiful tribute to your Dad.. Congrats on a great win... Arlene..
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 6/14/2014 12:18:00 AM
Thank you! He meant more to us than own lives!
Date: 6/10/2014 3:49:00 PM
What a nice win for you. Congrats. BG
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 6/10/2014 11:04:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/10/2014 3:46:00 PM
I want to cry with you, because i know how it feels. ((hugs)) well done placing first, a very emotional and sweet tribute to your father.
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 6/10/2014 11:05:00 PM
Thank you! I'm sorry for your loss as well.
Date: 6/10/2014 3:29:00 PM
Sabrina,, Congratulations....... Love your, poem. awesome and deep... Love <3 LINDA
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 6/10/2014 11:06:00 PM
Thank you Linda!
Date: 6/10/2014 1:14:00 PM
each line speaks of sadness and how a loving father that person is..... God bless you always!!!, Olive Eloisa
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 6/10/2014 11:06:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/10/2014 9:48:00 AM
Excellent write on the impact that a wonderful Dad can have on your life! Thank you for sharing this gem and congratulations on a well-deserved win! Kindest regards!
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 6/10/2014 11:07:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/28/2014 3:27:00 PM
HI SABRINA, CONGRAT, in the any poem goes contest. Have yourself a nice sunny day....... SKAT
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 1/29/2014 2:11:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/5/2014 3:14:00 AM
Very interesting and unique write, congrats on the win,
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 1/5/2014 7:41:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/3/2014 10:07:00 PM
Sabrina, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest and I. Stop by and read my latest when you have time, I will miss you:( have yourself an awesome 2014.. Always~ LINDA"
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 1/4/2014 12:22:00 AM
Thank you! I sure will go check it out. I hope you have a awesome 2014 also.. Hugs~Sabrina
Date: 11/27/2013 10:42:00 PM
Feel it in my heart <3 So sorry for your loss. . . Ive come very close to losing my Father many times. And in ways I have. So sorry you've experienced that pain <3
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 11/28/2013 12:18:00 AM
Thank you! It's not easy. It's a pain in it's very own class. I wouldn't wished this on my worst enemy.
Date: 11/12/2013 7:54:00 AM
A poem that tugs at the readers heartstrings. The emotion and dedication in each line shows how much your dad meant to you Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Good Deeds poem
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 11/14/2013 12:50:00 AM
Your welcome, I really enjoyed it. He meant the world to us, now. Thank you for reading!
Date: 11/6/2013 10:23:00 AM
heart felt write...LINDA
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 11/7/2013 12:55:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 10/27/2013 5:48:00 PM
Beautiful sentiment. Your dad was so special and loved. This poem is truly wonderful.
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 10/27/2013 11:38:00 PM
So very special. Thanks for reading!
Date: 10/25/2013 12:13:00 PM
Sad so sad. Light & Love
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 10/25/2013 11:57:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 10/25/2013 5:13:00 AM
Sad and emotional tributes to your father, Sabrina
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 10/25/2013 12:07:00 PM
Thank you!
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