We Lost More Than a Dad

We lost more than just a Dad that day
We lost half of how we came to be
We lost we four girls first love
We lost our Best Friend

We lost more than just a Dad that day
Our Mom lost her Soul Mate, Her other half 
Our children lost their Papaw
We lost our family’s foundation 
We lost the glue that held us together

We lost more than just a Dad that day
We lost the Strongest man we ever knew 
We lost the man we looked up too
We lost we four girls Teacher of many things

We lost more than just a Dad that day
We four girls lost our Hero
We lost some of our Light
We lost part of our Heart
We lost part of our Soul

We lost more than just a Dad that day
We lost some of our Courage
We lost some of our Strength
We lost some of our will to fight back
We lost some of our will to carry on
We four girls lost more than a Dad
We lost more than just a Dad that day
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A   Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 1:01 AM
Sabrina, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA ~
Hansel Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 1:52 AM
Thank you!*hugs*
Lamoureux Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Congrats on your win in the Dad Contest! Thanks for sharing with us.
Hansel Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 2:15 AM
Thank you for reading.
Selfa Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 1:21 AM
Congratulations!!! Well-deserved win!! :)
Hansel Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 7:05 AM
Thank you!
A  Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:01 PM
Sabrina, Congratulations on your win, in Judy Konos Dad contest. Love **SKAT**
Hansel Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 12:28 AM
Thank you!
Tunick Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 5:29 AM
All of what he was is still here... in you four girls.
Hansel Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 12:30 AM
I try to remind myself of that everyday. Thank you!
Johnson Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 8:47 PM
Oh but what you have will never be lost. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Hansel Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:16 AM
Thank you!
Konos Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Thank you for being in my contest. I have an idea that your Dad is in Heaven with the Lord and keeps watch over you. The next time you go outside "Look Up" and wave , "Hi Dad!" I do it all the time..
Hansel Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:27 AM
Thank you for it! I speak to mine all the time too! Especially each time my son goes out the door.
A   Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 7:57 PM
:)
A   Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 11:21 PM
thank you for the comment on my comment
Hansel Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 2:16 AM
Your welcome.
Smith Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 10:28 AM
Wow! You really poured your heart into this one.. Beautiful tribute to your Dad.. Congrats on a great win... Arlene..
Hansel Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 12:18 AM
Thank you! He meant more to us than own lives!
Gorelick Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 3:49 PM
What a nice win for you. Congrats. BG
Hansel Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 11:04 PM
Thank you!
Nance Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 3:46 PM
I want to cry with you, because i know how it feels. ((hugs)) well done placing first, a very emotional and sweet tribute to your father.
Hansel Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 11:05 PM
Thank you! I'm sorry for your loss as well.
A   Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 3:29 PM
Sabrina,, Congratulations....... Love your, poem. awesome and deep... Love <3 LINDA
Hansel Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 11:06 PM
Thank you Linda!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 1:14 PM
each line speaks of sadness and how a loving father that person is..... God bless you always!!!, Olive Eloisa
Hansel Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 11:06 PM
Thank you!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 9:48 AM
Excellent write on the impact that a wonderful Dad can have on your life! Thank you for sharing this gem and congratulations on a well-deserved win! Kindest regards!
Hansel Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 11:07 PM
Thank you!
A  Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 3:27 PM
HI SABRINA, CONGRAT, in the any poem goes contest. Have yourself a nice sunny day....... SKAT
Hansel Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 2:11 AM
Thank you!
Mehta Avatar
January 5, 2014 at 3:14 AM
Very interesting and unique write, congrats on the win,
Hansel Avatar
January 5, 2014 at 7:41 AM
Thank you!
A   Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 10:07 PM
Sabrina, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest and I. Stop by and read my latest when you have time, I will miss you:( have yourself an awesome 2014.. Always~ LINDA"
Hansel Avatar
January 4, 2014 at 12:22 AM
Thank you! I sure will go check it out. I hope you have a awesome 2014 also.. Hugs~Sabrina
Loveless Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 10:42 PM
Feel it in my heart <3 So sorry for your loss. . . Ive come very close to losing my Father many times. And in ways I have. So sorry you've experienced that pain <3
Hansel Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 12:18 AM
Thank you! It's not easy. It's a pain in it's very own class. I wouldn't wished this on my worst enemy.
Davis Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 7:54 AM
A poem that tugs at the readers heartstrings. The emotion and dedication in each line shows how much your dad meant to you Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Good Deeds poem
Hansel Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 12:50 AM
Your welcome, I really enjoyed it. He meant the world to us, now. Thank you for reading!
A   Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 10:23 AM
heart felt write...LINDA
Hansel Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 12:55 AM
Thank you!
Larison Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 5:48 PM
Beautiful sentiment. Your dad was so special and loved. This poem is truly wonderful.
Hansel Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 11:38 PM
So very special. Thanks for reading!
Guzzi Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 12:13 PM
Sad so sad. Light & Love
Hansel Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 11:57 PM
Thank you!
Mehta Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 5:13 AM
Sad and emotional tributes to your father, Sabrina
Hansel Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 12:07 PM
Thank you!
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