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We Lie Side By Side

we lie side by side face to face smell of thyme soup misty forest feels our eyes are innocent wisps gathering warm melodies Get Romantic - Poetry Contest Sponsor Andrea Dietrich Visual#7 1st Feb 2015

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Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2015 5:34:00 PM

aww steamy... nicely done, grats on your win :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/9/2015 1:13:00 AM

Such a unique and tender write...beautiful...congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Skat A

Date: 3/8/2015 6:18:00 PM

RAJAT, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 11:55:00 AM

Rajat, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Hija De La Luna

Date: 3/7/2015 8:37:00 PM

I felt it, Rajat! Congrats!

Joseph May

Date: 3/7/2015 4:04:00 PM

Congrats on your win Rajat

Paul Callus

Date: 3/7/2015 2:50:00 PM

I'm glad to be back with congratulations on a fine win, Rajat!! Very merited, my friend. // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/7/2015 2:05:00 PM

Very romantic and full of imagery, Rajat. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/7/2015 11:15:00 AM

this is a really fascinating one, to me, anyway; those last two lines are just wonderful, they really crown the poem - congrats on your win! :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/7/2015 1:04:00 PM

Love Charlotte / God bless/Rajat

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/7/2015 8:40:00 AM

Congratulations, Rajat! Your beautiful imagery took me away to that place of meeting. Hugs Kimberly xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/7/2015 1:06:00 PM

Thank you for beautiful comments, God bless. Love>>>rajat

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 4:54:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/7/2015 1:06:00 PM

Love Jan

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/7/2015 12:54:00 AM

Congrats my friend. Happy for you on your win! Hugs and smiles :D Kim

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/7/2015 1:07:00 PM

o my sweetest Kim thank you so much...rajat

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2015 11:42:00 PM

my goodness, Rajat. I very nearly gave this one a third place. i just adored the originality of the last two lines. Simply wonderful. And all the lines of this poem immersed us in our senses. Congrats for your win.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/7/2015 1:07:00 PM

Love Andie

Jan Allison

Date: 3/1/2015 4:57:00 PM

Lovely take on the image - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/3/2015 7:15:00 AM

Love Jan.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/1/2015 1:16:00 PM

Well done, Rajat! This is a very worthy entry for the contest. It is a beautiful tanka where the visuals and innocent sensual appeal lie side by side. #7 // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/3/2015 7:17:00 AM

Paul my friend thank you very much for your lovely comments.Regards...rajat