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We Lie Side By Side

we lie side by side
                               face to face smell of thyme soup
                                         misty forest feels
                                 our eyes are innocent wisps 
                                    gathering warm melodies

                                     




Get Romantic - Poetry Contest
Sponsor	Andrea Dietrich
Visual#7
1st Feb 2015

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Casarah Nance Date: 3/11/2015 5:34:00 PM aww steamy... nicely done, grats on your win :) Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 3/9/2015 1:13:00 AM Such a unique and tender write...beautiful...congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 3/8/2015 6:18:00 PM RAJAT, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/8/2015 11:55:00 AM Rajat, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Hija De La Luna Date: 3/7/2015 8:37:00 PM I felt it, Rajat! Congrats! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 3/7/2015 4:04:00 PM Congrats on your win Rajat Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 3/7/2015 2:50:00 PM I'm glad to be back with congratulations on a fine win, Rajat!! Very merited, my friend. // paul Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 3/7/2015 2:05:00 PM Very romantic and full of imagery, Rajat. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 3/7/2015 11:15:00 AM this is a really fascinating one, to me, anyway; those last two lines are just wonderful, they really crown the poem - congrats on your win! :) Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 3/7/2015 1:04:00 PM Love Charlotte / God bless/Rajat

Kim Shaw Date: 3/7/2015 8:40:00 AM Congratulations, Rajat! Your beautiful imagery took me away to that place of meeting. Hugs Kimberly xx Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 3/7/2015 1:06:00 PM Thank you for beautiful comments, God bless. Love>>>rajat

Jan Allison Date: 3/7/2015 4:54:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 3/7/2015 1:06:00 PM Love Jan

Kp Nunez Date: 3/7/2015 12:54:00 AM Congrats my friend. Happy for you on your win! Hugs and smiles :D Kim Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 3/7/2015 1:07:00 PM o my sweetest Kim thank you so much...rajat

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/6/2015 11:42:00 PM my goodness, Rajat. I very nearly gave this one a third place. i just adored the originality of the last two lines. Simply wonderful. And all the lines of this poem immersed us in our senses. Congrats for your win. Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 3/7/2015 1:07:00 PM Love Andie

Jan Allison Date: 3/1/2015 4:57:00 PM Lovely take on the image - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 3/3/2015 7:15:00 AM Love Jan.

Paul Callus Date: 3/1/2015 1:16:00 PM Well done, Rajat! This is a very worthy entry for the contest. It is a beautiful tanka where the visuals and innocent sensual appeal lie side by side. #7 // paul Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 3/3/2015 7:17:00 AM Paul my friend thank you very much for your lovely comments.Regards...rajat