We Geese

a goose and a gander wandering together wondering whatever maybe Paris or Rome for a home away from home for a while for a season not a reason migrating eliminates destinations and thinking not Canada again

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/17/2019 6:51:00 PM

Well, Jeff It surprises me that you don't get more comments. What's with it here? I get the feeling there's a great race on. The amount you write, beats the quality? Haikus are loved here. Whitman and some of the best poets would be at the bottom of the list. What say you? Love, Panagiota

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/20/2019 7:44:00 AM

Apologies, Jeff. I have been trying to comment on your Poems each day. I will stop. Not a perfect human being. P.R.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/17/2019 10:40:00 PM

What I find most disturbing is that your comment has nothing to do with any kind of critique of my poem "we geese"? I'd appreciate some feed back from your poetic mind, or actually any kind of actual comment since you are the one that sent it Panagiota.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/17/2019 10:32:00 PM

Truly I don't care, but I find it interesting that you compare amount with quality. And if you really knew Whitman he'd be sitting among the tops. So you ask, "What say you?" I say, "Please drop the word "love" if you are going to make an honest comment." Thanks so much for your insight Panagiota.