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We Enter the Scene

We enter the scene of a room— Not through a window— There is none; Not a single gap through the wall But for a door—an opening— Just one; At an end in this closed box, There’s a jutty hanging-out With a leavened candle-stick: Lighted Candles adorn the scene— They burn with fervor And a glowing wick.. …Nothing much is seen in the corners— Which are dark— In a gloom they sit… Apart from a feeble, ailing man, There’s seen none— No other presence… Apart still, from feebler groans We hear naught To baffle the sense… One moment, This Picture swims Across and through the head— Then all that’s heard is silence: When in the next, Is sensed a dead— The air grows heavy—a little dense… All of a sudden, the flames that burn, Start to curl and wiggle about; Now, in an attempt to free themselves, They writhe in pain—try reaching out: All in no time, the remnant dies— All argument, conjecture and surmise…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/29/2011 3:42:00 AM
this is an excellent poem
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:12:00 PM
Akash..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:17:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Akash. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/30/2010 4:36:00 AM
You have breathed the silence - Akash - a wonderful piece, a beauty of a poem. Good luck if it is for the contest.
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