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We Didn'T Know

Dad had threatened for some time to reclaim the land behind the shed, where rubbish over many years, had stockpiled but now instead of being easy to be shifted; blackberries, docks and thistles grow, entwining history of ours - and you know we didn't know. Mum cracked the whip one Sunday handing out the different tools for us to shovel, fork, pick and slash; of course she made the rules. We weren't to stop until the rubbish had been cleared and left to show a barren space to be landscaped - and you know we didn't know. Johnny parked the truck close to where we’d easily load the tray. First we had to slash blackberries to open up a pathway. Old fencing wire and bent droppers; we pulled and tugged, the work was slow. Plus bits of motors; old oil filters - and still we didn't know. The 'old man' knocked a stump out I can't remember being a tree. It disintegrated into pieces; white ant workings I could see. Plastic pots and old fuel drums onto the tray we heave and throw. Just on half the plots been cleaned up now - and still we didn't know. A concrete trough and a mattress spring; mesh from an old birdcage. A kitchen sink broken in two and a pushbike at some stage. Sardine tins; a barrow bowl, and a seized up mower that won't mow, now there's just one corner left to clean - and still we didn't know. A stack of roofing iron near the fence; the last that had to go. One by one we dragged the rusting sheets - and still we didn’t know. Dad picked up the final sheet and quickly threw it down again. His face was white and ‘cripes’ he shook - we 'bloody-well' knew then.

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Date: 5/22/2019 5:06:00 PM
I can only imagine what was under that sheet and nice sssss thing. Wonder how you live with so many around you we only have one in the corner of the province and nothing near us. I would be worried where I stepped. Made me shiver you did. lol love phyl
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 7:08:00 PM
Correct Phyllis … there'd be no need to worry Phyllis. Very few get bitten by snakes and it's usually when trying to kill the. It's best to leave snakes alone but they do startle you if surprised - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
Date: 5/21/2019 2:46:00 PM
Hi Lindsay - as usual a great poem and know that it always builds up to a magic ending - I presume Bob is right , a brown snake or one of many other poisonous snakes one finds in Australia, - we also have very poisonous snakes in S.A. Thank-you for sharing Lindsay - hugs, Jennifer
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 6:47:00 PM
G'day Jennifer … thank you once again Jennifer. Where we live, the tiger snake is our feared snake. Aggressive, fearless, highly venomous sand hunts at night mainly - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 5/20/2019 9:04:00 PM
G'day Lindsay, your poetry always leaves us smiling mate. Great imagery along with a brilliant write. Cheers!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 6:35:00 PM
Hello Charles … thanks for commenting Charles. This style of poetry is fairly easy to write because it's real with some tweaking. I'm pleased you can relate to this verse Charles - Lindsay
Date: 5/19/2019 3:10:00 PM
I've read all yer writes this Sun PM, Lindsay and as usual they left me slapping me knee! I'm gonna take a guess what wuz under that last sheet of roofin' arn - one of yer infamous brown snakes by crikey! Bob
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 6:31:00 PM
G'day there Bob … thanks for your encouraging comment once again Bob. We don't get many brown snakes here thank God, but we do have a black snake and a copperhead. Both non aggressive but venomous who frighten the living daylights out of you if unexpected - thanks Bob - Lindsay
Date: 5/19/2019 1:27:00 PM
Many of us Soupers never seem to improve whereas your work continues to grow! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 6:26:00 PM
G'day Rico … thank you for your huge compliment Rico. I feel a bit humble actually. I think many of us have got talent in our own particular thoughts and presentations - thank you Rico - Lindsay
Date: 5/19/2019 12:02:00 AM
My god, who was it ? lol. A cracker Lindsay. Tom
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 6:22:00 PM
G'day Tom … it was the resident snake Tom. If there is somewhere to hide a snake will keep your sheds and yard free of vermin. It's when a clean up is in progress that a surprise can face you - thanks Tom - Lindsay

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