We Danced In the Downpour

We danced in the downpour

The rains falls
not hard, more of a drizzle
this late Winter night
leaning on the light post
across the street,
watching the light in your window,
glowing slats through mini blinds,
outlines of your silhouette,
damp steel seeping my jacket,
cars pass, wipers waving, 
splashing in circular patterns,
glistening tire tracks,
straight lines on the damp asphalt

Staring up, dreaming,
still feeling your good night kiss,
wondering if you know
I am nothing without you,
my life is because of you
So many years spent floating,
blurs in lingering dark shadows
curbs to sleep in, yesterday's news,
broken bleachers where others met,
and I watched, fearing never me,
darkness would be my hand to hold,
lunchtime falterings on tuna salad wishes, 
a clean plate in line for desert,
they just ran out, 
vanilla pudding disappointment, 
and it was...

I flick the ashes from my damp Marlboro light,
as I notice the lamp in your room is out,
when did that happen, where was I, 
and the drizzle coats my glasses
A chill claims me as the street light flickers
and I suppose it's time to go
in these saturated high tops 
squishing as I pace this sidewalk
of smeared chalk masterpieces

My heart aches again, my life, this night,
every night on an avenue to the border,
is truly nothing without you,
an empty hull hauling cargo of the past,
an existence worth the lint in my pocket,
a poem folded and kept,
written for you in dreams pasted 
on walls of off-white,
in a hallway of desire with your name
layered in patterns that mirror my heartbeat
and I wonder if you know...there is no other, 
none that can compare, 
none that could ever be,
no one will ever touch me, thrill me or
love me like you do and I will not be...
I will not be, I can not be without you

Turning to leave these clinging shadows,
sighing I want you but the hour is now late,
you’re probably in bed, but 
any time away from you is lonely
The rains fall harder now, a liquid curtain
all but blocking my view, blinding me,
when a hand on my arm spins me,  
it is you, drenched, smiling brown eyes 
on this dreary night as you tell me
you know,  you know and it is me
and you mean it, I can tell

We dance in the downpour,
it is us and we are in love, 
to the melody of the rain,
our song, they are all our songs, 
kicking puddles and laughing 
with wet eye lashes, kissing,
soaked with love, 
with devotion and sunny days,
moonlit nights and a lifetime with each other
on a sidewalk, a rainy night, a street light
and forever...you and me


Good night Soupers

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Date: 6/28/2019 3:59:00 PM
Lol a good night soupers! These I really have missed! Hahaha! They use to help me sleep at night and I was so thankful for that! Isn't your birthday coming up soon chris? Well hope your day isn't all bad! I need to get going a doctor appointment and all!;) miss our chats!;)
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Date: 1/19/2017 7:49:00 AM
Very powerful poem Chris. Great details. What a beautiful ending. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:20:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one Heidi.
Date: 1/19/2017 3:58:00 AM
This poem gives me goosebumps. The descriptions, the little detailsm the kicking puddles, the wet eye lashes, the tuna salad wishes, the damp asphaltm the street -light, makes any reader live the moment I so believe. A definite favourite, ( You should read Ruben O, He used to write these type of poems...On the same wave-length, I think you'll enjoy his writes, as much as I enjoyed reading yours) .Awesome, so talented.A fave,
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Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:19:00 AM
Thanks so very much my sweet friend for your wonderful comments on my poem. Goosebumps are a good thing. I will definitely check out Ruben O when I get a chance. I am glad you liked this one.
Date: 1/18/2017 11:53:00 PM
Wonderful write and good night Hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:18:00 AM
Thank you so very much Eve.
Date: 1/18/2017 11:40:00 PM
If only... Sleep well, Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:16:00 AM
Thanks so very much Darren for always leaving such kind words for me my friend. I appreciate you
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Darren White
Date: 1/19/2017 5:57:00 AM
Just. .. sigh... it's just that you are one of MY favourite poets... Cannot even begin to describe what I like about this poem.
Date: 1/18/2017 7:19:00 PM
A true romantic of the highest order
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Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:15:00 AM
Thank you so very much Frederick.
Date: 1/18/2017 6:58:00 PM
Such an imagery rich poem Chris with a happy ending...if only
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Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:15:00 AM
Thanks so very much Tim.
Date: 1/18/2017 6:45:00 PM
Maroon 5. Animals song. You nailed that one. There's a guy Im noticing lately that scares the ever loving poem out of me. Your poem Chris. Pray for me. Love is scary..And he's dreamy. I wish u the best my friend. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:15:00 AM
That is great news Holly. I hope he notices back. I'll be sure to keep checking your poems for romantic updates. :) Thanks for your kindness my friend.
Date: 1/18/2017 6:39:00 PM
excellent x
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Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Casarah
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