We Cometh To Mars

WE COMETH TO MARS

Now after so many trials and errors we have succeeded where all of the others have failed. We arrived on Mars in a mechanical form, a small rocket called Fred.

Contact is by radio, twenty minute delay between the two worlds. Just forty years ago all of this would have seemed a dream.

With our advanced technology and a little luck we have achieved the impossible.
Now Fred slowly picks his way over the Martian surface probing and picking his scientific way using his probe.

His batteries last only a week but imagine what he will see; we sit back on Earth and watch in awe as data streams forth.

This is truly a historic moment, one of the most important yet for man. Soon he will follow in a manned mission, following Fred and his one-way trip.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Jimmy Boom Semtex Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 12:18 PM
hi all thanx so much. :)
A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 1:56 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write nick! Brilliant work!
Wigley Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 12:26 AM
Long live Fred. Nice writem Nick, well done. Regards, Viv
A  Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 5:14 PM
NICK Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
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