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It’s not as though we lost our cool without any reason at all; the unschooled should follow this rule: no smoking’s allowed in the hall. Others may call it a defect but it’s the butterfly effect, against which fragile lungs protest and smokers, we speak not in jest.

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Date: 2/2/2024 10:23:00 PM
I agree, smoking is bad for one's health, and a rude behavior while in the presence of others that don't smoke. Thanks for the warning, my friend. Write On! Bill
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Date: 2/2/2024 10:39:00 PM
Thank you, Bill
Date: 2/2/2024 5:05:00 AM
2d hand smoke = EEEWWW.
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Date: 2/2/2024 5:50:00 AM
Eewww indeed it is ~ ugly
Date: 2/2/2024 3:26:00 AM
Once I used to smoke but I gave up the habit. Waste of money and dangerous to one's health.
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Date: 2/2/2024 5:50:00 AM
Wise decision, Victor

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