We Became


Love possesses a soul of it's own,
organic and autonomic
It propagate waves of attraction,
moving strangers closer to the sphere of friends
Thus you and I became ...
Feeling the elliptical bond of mutual desire,
we steadily, over time, moved past the platonic,
into the sublimated hot zone of privacy ...
Together alone
I energized into the matrix of you,
and you molecular phased into me
Thus we became one soul entity
I fell into the gravity well of your heart,
and you lessened the density of your core integration ...
letting me easily pass through the membrane of your mind,
by way of mental osmosis
Thus you and I became ...
Our sum greater than our parts,
our combined love weighed greater than our hearts
As I look through your eyes,
I see life in a completely new dimension of sensation
As you gaze through my eyes, 
you observe the spiritual revelation of love's elevation
And thus we two became ...
One with the universe
We became
one with all things
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Wolf Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 5:29 AM
Awesome, RW! Need I say more? Of course, I must! In this poem, you have become one with your quill my friend! A real gem mate! Cheers bro.
Y. Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 8:03 PM
WoW! Freddie, I am almost speechless. I am blown away by this romantic write. You caputured the essence of what happens when two people fall inlove very well. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 7:36 PM
Whao! Love is a beautiful thing pleasurable to the soul. As always, an incredible craft.
Green Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Wow a love poem and a science lesson in one sitting. :) Loved this my friend, I rally enjoyed how you wove the two themes until they as well became one.
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