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We Are the Dead


       We are the dead that visit you at night,
Can you not feel our sadness and our yearning;
             This deathly realm is a dark endless void,
We feel your pain and your deep sorrow weeping.

      We are the dead that visit you at night,
Forever we are linked to your earthly presence;
             Waiting for that last gasping breath of life,
And then you will join us in the vastness of death.

      We are the dead that visit you at night,
All your tears and all your broken dreams we feel;
             Life can be so painfully full of sad grieving,
But death sad heart is sweet and velvet with peace.

      We are the dead that visit you at night,
Wear your mask of living but we know the truth;
              Oh yes, we can see the scars in your soul,
Cut deep and bleeding red among the dead that dwell.

      We are the dead that visit you at night,
Waiting and never leaving you until that last breath;
           You know us all by each beloved name,
And when your hand we grasp do not resist sad heart. 

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November 11, 2015

Poetry/Verse/We Are The Dead
Copyright Protected, ID 15-725-528-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Submitted to the contest, 100 In A Row - 3
Sponsor, PD

Third Place
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For the contest, Dark Poetry, 
sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/12/2016 11:23:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your 101 in a ROW contest number 3 win, Luv SKAT
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Date: 7/11/2016 4:11:00 PM
Eerily beautiful! I like the repeated line on each stanza. Congrats on your win, Constance!
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Date: 7/9/2016 3:40:00 PM
Congrats on your beautiful win my lovely smiling friend. A beautiful 7. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/9/2016 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations B/R, well done...
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Date: 7/9/2016 8:01:00 AM
Congrats!!! on 3rd Place Wings...well deserving..."I'm loving it"...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 7/9/2016 4:31:00 AM
Broken,, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my blog "The Garden Spider" if you like. Nice to have you join my contest. Luv Linda
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Date: 11/17/2015 1:35:00 PM
Congrats, but excuse me if I resist a bit longer.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/17/2015 3:17:00 PM
Dave thanks so much for the congratulations appreciate
Date: 11/16/2015 9:09:00 PM
Congratulations. SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 11:24:00 PM
Thank you ~
Date: 11/16/2015 3:53:00 PM
Absolutely LOVE the repetition of the first line of each verse...I believe in my heart that the 4th verse is absolutely true and the last is SO comforting and positive...Congrats and straight to my favs - Tim
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 11/16/2015 5:00:00 PM
And once again, the lady in the picture looks like you...
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Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 4:56:00 PM
Tim, oh thanks for that wonderful comment and the congrats and the fav, I am so honored ~
Date: 11/16/2015 1:00:00 PM
I love this Broken Wings, congrats!! well deserved 1st place for sure!!! :) *smiles*- LU xxx
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Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 1:11:00 PM
Laura, thank you so much Laura for the nice comment and the congrats ~
Date: 11/16/2015 12:32:00 PM
#1, way to go! I feel so proud to be in the esteemed company I'm in with this one.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 1:12:00 PM
James, thanks for the visit and the nice comment ~
Date: 11/16/2015 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win! "but death dear heart is sweet and velvet with peace"--especially powerful Janice
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Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 11:12:00 AM
Thank you Janice, for that lovely comment and the congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 11/16/2015 9:03:00 AM
A very painful write, wings! Nevertheless, congrats on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 11:14:00 AM
Balveen, indeed a dark sad write, thanks for the congrats ~
Date: 11/16/2015 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations in your win BW. An excellent dark poem.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 11:15:00 AM
Nayda, thank you so much for the wonderful placement in your dark poem contest, I am so honored ~
Date: 11/13/2015 11:37:00 AM
creepy and comforting at the same time.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/13/2015 4:42:00 PM
Nathan, veeeeery creepy but you are right it has a warmth to it, thank you so much for visiting ~
Date: 11/12/2015 12:33:00 PM
It would be nice to be able to enjoy ones own death and make it a last hurrah. I always have believed that life could be beautiful for all, but then that has not happened. There is so much sorrow and people who have died with it.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/12/2015 1:45:00 PM
Duke, I have seen many people die in my job as nurse and sometimes it is peaceful and sometimes it is a struggle to the very end, I hope mine is peaceful ~
Date: 11/11/2015 2:21:00 PM
I love the way you pen death as "velvet and peace"..Broken Wings. Your piece is as dark as it is illuminating :), jill
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Constance La France
Date: 11/11/2015 3:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Jill for the visit and the nice comment. ..
Date: 11/11/2015 1:51:00 PM
BW, great lines and I really like the repeated one.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/11/2015 3:20:00 PM
Thanks James, appreciate your visit .
Date: 11/11/2015 12:19:00 PM
very dark and haunting Broken Wings good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 11/11/2015 3:22:00 PM
Thank you so much for visiting
Date: 11/11/2015 8:44:00 AM
Oh yes, it is really dark for the contest, yet the swirling ghosts of the departed do whisper to me always ~
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