Notes About The Poem

We Are So Different

We are so different

I am smart, you are less so
I am a man, you are a woman
I am trump, you are poor
I am beautiful, you live in a sewer
I have castles, you’re lucky to have drawers
I am peaceful, you are the extremist
I have armies, you have child suicide bombers
I have coffee, you have tea
See the difference between you and me?

I wear clothes under my head, you wear masks over
I sing songs in my sanctuary, while you chant the jihad
I have my god who is righteous; you have a god that sings of terror
My god is great, yours is a fraud
I ride in a limo, you ride a gay camel
I drink fine whiskey, you smoke camel fags
We you see… are as different
As night is to day
As sun is to moon
As Cain is to Abel
I own the castle you live in the stable
Goats and hogs your only staple

Now when we were in the hospital
Me so much better than you, you see
Both our sons sick of leukemia
You being so different and less than me
You cried, and you wept, and you wished yourself dead
If your child should live, you'd give all you ever had
Its then I saw, I’d do exactly the same
When you offered me a tissue
I confess I felt a wee little shame
Whatever hate you may or may not have had
Lifted, when you saw the child was your only lad
And when I saw this humble startling revelation
I realized how narrow and condescending I was behaving
So maybe we both learned a lesson of Job
A pity such sadness and pain had to bring
The realization to us both
We are not so different after all 

We now drink tea in the olive gardens
Telling the young if they chose to listen
There is a better path, of happier wisdom
By embracing your fellow man
No matter race, color or convictions
Start with a smile
Make it last more than a mile
Great things happen
When us, the people take action
Yours truly
Two fathers
Of this world


Thank you Charmaine for the constant inspiration!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Burch Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 10:12 PM
Existential yet vulnerable with humour and hope!! well done, Art! Big Hugggs.
Vaso Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 11:41 PM
Than you so much! poet with such beautiful smile!!!
Wanter Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 7:30 PM
I gasped when I was reading this and had emotional tears. What a good poet you are.
Vaso Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 11:40 PM
Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed!
Onclaud Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 6:59 PM
really impressed by the twist and finale of this story, arthur... it's my time to say wow oh wow!.. huggs
Vaso Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 11:40 PM
You are so so kind Nette, Thanks!
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Fabulous poem with a great message .. (got to say the line about the gay camel sure made me lol)hugs jan xx
Vaso Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 11:39 PM
Laughter is always the best medicine! :) Hugs!
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 8:43 AM
Just amazing Arthur.
Vaso Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 11:39 PM
Thanks Tim! :) Cheers!
Gupta Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Brilliant work ... Wonderful ... A great poem ...
Vaso Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 11:38 PM
Thank you so much Probir!
Y. Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 8:13 AM
WoW! Arthur, Just like I was moved and touched by Charma's poem. I feel the same about this well written piece. Because at the end of the day no matter what our differences are: we all feel, bleed, laugh, hurt and cry. We all are human and that fact alone trumps our differences. Excellent job. A without a doubt seven and straight into my faves:-) Alexis
Vaso Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 11:38 PM
You have said that so well Alexis, thank you!
Chircop Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 4:01 AM
Hi Arthur...I am deeply touched by the first part of your poem...I couldnt help saying to myself...Oh yes We.are so different...But then in the second part..Onceagain I found myself thinking..Oh yes We are not so different..When it comes to those We love.We are human with a human heart that feels...I had goosebumps reading your profound poem.Im glad my simple scribble inspired it...A fave.
Vaso Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 11:37 PM
Your heart is an inspiration to many! Thank you!
Stover Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 12:15 AM
This is an exquisite poem. Brilliantly written with a profound message.
Vaso Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 11:37 PM
Thank you Christy, :)
Goff Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 8:47 PM
Arthur, this poem of redemption vividly sets the table for the great relief the last 2 stanzas provide, nicely done! jimbo
Vaso Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 11:36 PM
Thanks so much James!
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