Len Gasun Poet Diminished Hexaverse

We Are One In Christ

Forgive and give for
great peace offering
are powerful acts
in swapped syllables
for perfect healing

Forgive and give
Greet with regret
Hug our brother
With Our Father

Say sorry,
I love you
Let it go

For we’re
one in 

Christ





June 29, 2022        15.13pm

PS Syllable Counter
Syllables Per Line:	5 5 5 5 5 0 4 4 4 4 0 3 3 3 0 2 2 0 1



Forgiveness
Contest Judged:  7/18/2022 5:27:00 AM
Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Place 2 (out of 4 multi-w)

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian August 7, 2022 at 1:24 AM Congrats! Very well done. "Forgive and give" You give joy to us poets when you comment on our efforts. This supports and encourages poets like me learning from the seat of my pants. Never sure about right way to write. Thank you for giving. Len Gasun August 7, 2022 at 6:25 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Barbara for stopping by, reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings. You too are giving me support and encouragement my dear friend and I found your poems all amazing, the flow, metaphors and others are great. We learned from one another here and I thank you for sharing your talents in poetry with me/us all here. You're one of the assets in this poetry site, God bless you always and your writings.

Paula Goldsmith July 18, 2022 at 8:59 AM Back with "Congratulations" on your win. To forgive is a blessing. I like to let God handle it. Have a great/blessed day writing away................... Len Gasun July 19, 2022 at 5:46 AM You're right my dear friend. Thank you so much for stopping by leaving me your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always. Hugs

Valsa George July 18, 2022 at 6:17 AM Forgiveness is the great lesson Jesus Christ taught us ! 'If you don't forgive, you shall not be forgiven by your Heavenly Father'....! Powerful write. Congratulations dear friend ! Len Gasun July 19, 2022 at 5:45 AM You're right my dear friend. Thank you so much for stopping by leaving me your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always. Hugs

Sara Kendrick June 29, 2022 at 2:51 PM We all need to forgive for our wellbeing, but sometimes it is not so easy. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara Len Gasun June 30, 2022 at 9:03 AM Thanks for your wonderful visit, for reading my poem and your kind comments my dear friend Sara. So much appreciated. God bless you.I'll be back in awhile. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith June 29, 2022 at 1:58 PM A powerful write. Love your ending. Have a blessed day............... Len Gasun June 30, 2022 at 8:58 AM Thank you my dear friend Paula for reading my poem, your precious time and kind comment. So much appreciated along with your continuous support. God bless you. Hugs. I'll be back in awhile to visit you.