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We Are One In Christ

Forgive and give for great peace offering are powerful acts in swapped syllables for perfect healing Forgive and give Greet with regret Hug our brother With Our Father Say sorry, I love you Let it go For we’re one in Christ June 29, 2022 15.13pm PS Syllable Counter Syllables Per Line: 5 5 5 5 5 0 4 4 4 4 0 3 3 3 0 2 2 0 1 Forgiveness Contest Judged: 7/18/2022 5:27:00 AM Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon Place 2 (out of 4 multi-w)

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 8/7/2022 1:24:00 AM

Congrats! Very well done. "Forgive and give" You give joy to us poets when you comment on our efforts. This supports and encourages poets like me learning from the seat of my pants. Never sure about right way to write. Thank you for giving.

Len Gasun
Date: 8/7/2022 6:25:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Barbara for stopping by, reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings. You too are giving me support and encouragement my dear friend and I found your poems all amazing, the flow, metaphors and others are great. We learned from one another here and I thank you for sharing your talents in poetry with me/us all here. You're one of the assets in this poetry site, God bless you always and your writings.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/18/2022 8:59:00 AM

Back with "Congratulations" on your win. To forgive is a blessing. I like to let God handle it. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................

Len Gasun
Date: 7/19/2022 5:46:00 AM

You're right my dear friend. Thank you so much for stopping by leaving me your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always. Hugs

Valsa George

Date: 7/18/2022 6:17:00 AM

Forgiveness is the great lesson Jesus Christ taught us ! 'If you don't forgive, you shall not be forgiven by your Heavenly Father'....! Powerful write. Congratulations dear friend !

Len Gasun
Date: 7/19/2022 5:45:00 AM

You're right my dear friend. Thank you so much for stopping by leaving me your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always. Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/29/2022 2:51:00 PM

We all need to forgive for our wellbeing, but sometimes it is not so easy. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara

Len Gasun
Date: 6/30/2022 9:03:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit, for reading my poem and your kind comments my dear friend Sara. So much appreciated. God bless you.I'll be back in awhile. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/29/2022 1:58:00 PM

A powerful write. Love your ending. Have a blessed day...............

Len Gasun
Date: 6/30/2022 8:58:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend Paula for reading my poem, your precious time and kind comment. So much appreciated along with your continuous support. God bless you. Hugs. I'll be back in awhile to visit you.