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We Are Energy

We are pure energy, drawn from the stars— adrift in a vacuum halfway between sun and Mars. Is our existence the product of chance— or the musings of gods who create with a glance? Scheming with purpose, they sculpt nascent ooze— to grant agency's gift: the freedom to choose. We travel through time and grow old in this place. And ponder the void that permeates space. With power to ascend; yet ignoble of mind. And to matters of goodness, we've gone totally blind. We stand at a crossroad of virtue and lust. So to spread wings of valor, or return to the dust?

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Date: 1/24/2021 12:15:00 PM
With all the great minds in this world, you would think someone would know something about the meaning of life, yet we know very little...You give the reader much to ponder on with this wonderful poem... An excellent work with smooth flowing rhythms and rhymes!
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Mark Peterson
Date: 5/27/2021 7:35:00 PM
The entities that created the universe, who knows how old, I believe, would not allow any of their creations simply to disappear into oblivion. Instead, they would have found and provided a way for us to ascend. I can only gasp at what that might include.
Date: 9/3/2020 7:54:00 PM
The eternal questions, always to seek, very evocative, especially like the 'we travel through time' stanza!
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Mark Peterson
Date: 9/11/2020 9:31:00 AM
Thanks, Michelle. Lovely tribute from a poet's poet.

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