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We Always Survives

 

Mom and I liked to go on country drives,
she drove fast and I feared for our lives;
we got lost most of the time,
in lush scenery sublime;
Oh, don't worry ! 'Cause we always survives !

Down long winding roads many farms we passed,
but because they were a blur I looked fast;
we sped by brown mooing cows,
and startled farmers on ploughs;
later, I exclaimed  . . .  Mom that was a blast !

Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2024

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/26/2024 3:27:00 PM This is sure cute, Constance. Congrats and thanks for my poetry win. I really enjoyed your last contest theme. I WILL still do my swap quatrain contest but at first of June Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/29/2024 2:42:00 PM Andrea, thank you for the compliment, congrats and comment, looking forward to your new contest, hugs

Tania Kitchin Date: 5/25/2024 1:56:00 PM Constance, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet limerick set! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/29/2024 2:43:00 PM Tania, thank you for the contest and my placement and the compliment, hugs

Valsa George Date: 5/11/2024 10:17:00 PM Traveling through country roads enjoying cows grazing in farms and the scenery with one's mother is a delightful experience. The drive in breakneck speed cutting the air, sometimes happens without our knowledge when we are in high spirits, though it can be dangerous. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/12/2024 3:32:00 PM Valsa, thank you for the comment, yes, it was dangerous but that was my mom ! She did slow down eventually when I told her I would not get in the car with her unless I drove, hugs

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/11/2024 4:25:00 PM Enjoyed the humor that isn't really humor when you think about it. So dangerous was the speeding even though we all do it from time to time. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. I appreciate the honor given me by being on your winners' list. Sara K Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/12/2024 3:34:00 PM Sara, thank you for the comment, we never had an accident but I started refusing to drive with her, so she slowed down, hugs

Yann Rolland Date: 5/9/2024 7:11:00 PM enjoyed yann Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/10/2024 7:20:00 AM Yann, thank you for the compliment, hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 5/9/2024 5:20:00 PM Dear Constance, your poem artistically captures the essence of a special bond between a mother and child, navigating life's twists and turns together. I loved how the blend of fear and exhilaration in the country drives mirrors the complexities of love and trust. Yet, even in uncertainty, there's strength in companionship, and resilience in the face of challenges. Loved it! - Blessings, Daniel Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/10/2024 7:21:00 AM Daniel, thank you for the wonderful comment, and compliment, I miss my mom so much and our country drives, appreciate, blessings