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We Always Felt

If only perfect moments of pure happiness 

We always felt 

If only that carefree sense of freedom 

We always felt 

If only that mellow feeling laughter bestows

We always felt 

If only those moments of pure joy and fulfilment

Lasted a lifetime

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Brandy Nicole Date: 3/14/2025 7:44:00 PM Dear Deb, yes, we're always seeking those tender moments of peace. When they do enter our world, hold onto them for as long as possible. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/21/2025 1:20:00 PM Thankyou sweet Brandy….its always a pleasure to read your comment! Debx

Zyrool Gifford Date: 3/11/2025 2:49:00 PM Hello Deb, If only my magic wand did work, I would make it a reality, my friend. Enjoyed reading your beautiful write. Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/13/2025 2:53:00 AM You are so sweet Zyrool…..thankyou my lovely friend! Debx

Jerry Brotherton Date: 3/11/2025 2:11:00 PM If only we felt them always would be such joy. I think I'd settle for just once or twice. Great write dear Sister Deb. Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/13/2025 2:52:00 AM Thanks bro hehe! Always love getting your comments Jerry! Debx

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/11/2025 9:46:00 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I think it is called heaven. Have a blessed day as you write away................. Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/11/2025 11:28:00 AM What a lovely answer Paula! Thanks Debx

Lin Lane Date: 3/11/2025 4:10:00 AM If only ~ then what a euphoric world we'd live in... peacefully. Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/11/2025 11:27:00 AM Will never happen in our lifetime! Thanks Miss Lin….Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/11/2025 2:47:00 AM - The truth is different... the path of life is not straight ahead... it has many sharp turns... lovely written, Deb :) - hugs Login to Reply Deb M Date: 3/11/2025 11:26:00 AM Lifes path is not straight thats for sure Sunshine! Thankyou so much my friend! Debx