We Are In Love

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10/02/23

Love poem using words of four letters or....

Contest by

Darla Seely.

WE  ARE  IN  LOVE

     
      We two are just in teen.
      Seed of love to sow.
      Love of baby tree to grow.
      Hard root to sink deep in soul.
      Weak stem on fear of loss.
      Soft bud yet to open fold.
      Shy look ! Not bold.

        Wild love to try to peep.
        Yet love to roll and rush.
        Urge to jump to flow fast.
        We two to soar high up sky
        with free wing like bird.

         Our love to last till last sec.
         of our life. It’s our vow.
         We won’t part.
         He is for me and I am for him.
        He is the Moon to glow in my soul.
        Me the only star to glaze in his mind.
        Each day we will stay side by side.
        Our path of life to aim same goal.
         We are tied in bond of love.

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Hilo Poet

Date: 11/9/2023 3:46:00 PM

Ah, yes, Anisha. The absence of youth and the word 'naughty' are also unheard of. I have come to embrace my earlier faults with time. I am glad I made that mistake that manifested itself for the better. Blessings, my friend. Aloha, William

Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/9/2023 7:10:00 PM

Thanks and Blessings

Debjani Mitra

Date: 10/12/2023 2:19:00 AM

This is very cute, like teenage love

Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/9/2023 7:09:00 PM

Thanks and Blessings

Ink Empress

Date: 10/2/2023 7:26:00 AM

How beautiful and heartfelt is this poem you’ve woven with just four letter words, i just posted mine too and it was truly challenging! You’ve done an excellent job here, the flow and emotions in this is impeccable! Touched my soul, fave definitely

Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/9/2023 7:09:00 PM

Thanks and Blessings

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/2/2023 2:36:00 AM

Awh, how sweet and adorable is this kind of love, so full of dreams and blooming with the first flutters of butterflies.. I love the way so elegantly you've woven a beautiful story and that too, following a specific style of using only 4 letter words or less.. That's definitely challenging.. But this is such a gorgeous take for the contest.. Best of luck dear poetess :)