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Written 1 August 2025 for This or That , Vol 35 Poetry Contest sponsored by  Edward Ibeh

Ways of Providence

9.7 Bhagavad Gita As It Is "The whole cosmic order is under Me."
10.8 Bhagavad Gita As It Is "I am the source of all spiritual and material worlds. Everything emanates from Me ."
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                                   Ways of Providence

                        Ways and will of divine providence
                 Across time, by sages have been surmised,
                  With flames of faith shining in prominence 
                       In attempts the web of fate to untie,
                   Yet His design and ways remain complex,
                    Rendering human folks often perplexed.

                 The whole cosmic order glows with His will:
                     The ebb and the flow of gigantic waves
                     As the drop of an autumn leaf with frill
                        Are all but his ever obliging slaves,
               As are summer rains that quench thirsty earth
                       For nature to display its real worth.
 
                    With whole universe under His control,
                      As sole creator of man and nature,
                     He does exert His sway on every soul
                      In ways suitable for every creature,
                 Yet for man to comprehend would be vain,
                     Beyond the grasp of his limited brain.

                  Oft one can eye souls fully dipped in faith
              Torn, shorn and worn out by the hands of fate
                     Amidst folks basking in sun of unfaith
                        Ever in a boastful carousing state,
                   Some swimming in a sea of evil deeds
                But prospering with ill-gained wealth, indeed.
 
                  Whether providence inflicts waves of pains
                        To bring souls close to the divinity,
               Or to drown them in streams of stinging strains
                     As back pay for wrongs to the trinity
                    Hover as mysteries in greyish clouds,
                  As ambiguities veiled with dark shrouds.

                 To wit, a humble oak tree by fate`s hands
              Battered four times and hurled to harsh Hades,
                      Oft shattered by axes of evil men,  
                    Is able with heavenly grace and aids
                   To stand on its pining trunk despite all,
                  Weather the woeful winds and remain tall.

                 The tree, since youth, rooted in divine trust,
             Through storms, has witnessed its faith pick up high,
                       Views the ills of providence as a must,
                       As blessings to pitch it close to the sky 
                       Fast-track the pace of its inner voyage
                        And convey it to a much higher stage. 

                      Despite bearing the blows of providence
                 Now with leaves of the tree, blown by the breeze,
                          It hums hymns of gratitude, evidence 
                      Of its will to trail its goals, though on knees,
                 With stretched arms, greet the ways of providence
                           With shines of fortitude and tolerance. 

                       Providence wields His wand of fair justice 
                           Equally towards all men, poor or rich,
                        Across time or space, no one it does miss,
                         But also does not leave deep in the ditch
                       Those who seek His mercy with a pure heart
                        And to them His love and grace He imparts.

                    Through diverse ways providence shows His love:
                              As a father to bring his son to light,
                         To cherish the glow sparkling from above,
                              To pilot him to the path that is right,
                               Often times seeming as retribution,
                              But couched with beneficial intention.

                          Indeed, complex are ways of providence,
                          Trying to grasp them with a human mind
                             In absence of the sparks of evidence
                         Leads to the realm of trust and faith to find
                           Seemly words to pen with respect verses
                            On ways of Him who rules the Universe.
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Date: 8/10/2025 5:26:00 AM
God, being the creator of the universe, allows ebb and flow in our lives. Many of His ways leave us puzzled and perplexed. With our small brain, we can't grasp the purpose or intention of His acts. While the virtuous suffer and the wicked prosper, we can't find any supernal justice. Yet, all through life, one can see the providence of God. A deep reflection on the subject, done so poetically. Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 8/10/2025 2:11:00 AM
Congratulations, dear poet, on taking first place in this contest, with lyrics rich and profound, expressing wisdom and rubicund eloquence in halls of option.
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Date: 8/9/2025 6:32:00 PM
A thoughtful poem that shows faith and strength in life’s mysteries. I really liked the nature images—they made the message feel real and hopeful. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/9/2025 10:27:00 PM
Thanks a lot Rowena for appreciating the poem and your kind wishes. These have elevated my spirit and made my day. may the blessings of light brighten your day.
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