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          W Words Contest hosted by Constance La France

                              August 15, 2023

"I'd ride on the current of the Wayfarer Wind, not caring where his breath would take me." ~ by poet I hear his echoed thrumming when nights are clear His wistful voice floating across meadow and range Softly, urging me to follow, he whispers in my ear and then flies off. I wonder, why does he disappear? I find the hide and seek game he plays, a bit strange. He's a will-o'-the-wisp, moving from place to place not knowing where he'll blow, unrouted on a chart This Wayfarer is the wind, a drifter without a face To far reaches of foreign lands he chooses to race Obeying Nature's desire, he takes the task to heart. He wanders swiftly upon an evening's chilled breeze Ruffling blades of sawgrass where his fingers tread Through hanging branches of weeping willow trees He's the reason waves crash across turbulent seas Wayfarer rambles where he pleases, it's been said. Yet, he'll whimsically lift a kite to delight a child Blustering, he teases without chagrin, all day long Or he can blaze trails of fire that rapidly run wild through vales, charring trees until they're defiled He sings without guilt, howling a braggartly song A tempest traveler flutters through limbs of pines The game he plays can be wicked or full of mirth He doesn't abide by rules and ignores guidelines As a friend or a villain, the Wayfarer has designs on roaming his way on currents across the Earth.

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Date: 8/16/2023 12:04:00 PM
- Back to congratulate you on your win, Lin :) - hugs
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Date: 8/16/2023 12:18:00 PM
Thanks a lot for returning, Anne-Lise.
Date: 8/16/2023 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Wayfarer" is a wonderful write/picture. "Love It" Have a great day............
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Date: 8/16/2023 11:11:00 AM
I'm pleased to read your fine comments and congrats. Thanks, Paula.
Date: 8/16/2023 7:24:00 AM
"He doesn't abide by rules and ignores guidelines As a friend or a villain, the Wayfarer has designs" - A very beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/16/2023 8:11:00 AM
Thanks for such generous comments, Chris.
Date: 8/16/2023 6:00:00 AM
Lin, your imagery is consistently exceptional. Your writing is impressively crafted, my friend. Congratulations on your outstanding Win.
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Date: 8/16/2023 6:09:00 AM
Many thanks for your supportive remarks, Lasaad. I'm grateful for your loyal reading of my poetry.
Date: 8/15/2023 12:49:00 PM
The wayward wind is a restless wind but provides with fun. Lovely rhymes.
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Date: 8/16/2023 5:13:00 AM
You've brought to mind a song, Victor. Thank you for taking time to read me and leaving such sweet comments.
Date: 8/15/2023 12:47:00 PM
The Wayfarer is totally unpredictable at ground level Lin, and chooses its own path, you express this phenomenon so very well here, and remind us he’s totally out of our control, however I can predict this one will rate very highly in contest, excellent as always, cheers David
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Date: 8/16/2023 5:13:00 AM
Leaving in hurricane territory, I'm too well aware of the unpredictability of the wind. There's no controlling it, despite Trump once saying that nuking them would destroy them. HA! What else would it destroy? Thanks so much, David.
Date: 8/15/2023 10:34:00 AM
- Since time immemorial, humans have tried to understand their surroundings, but nature is always changing and capricious ... a wonderful poem, Lin - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 8/15/2023 11:49:00 AM
More now than ever, it seems the world around us is changing, and nothing that enhances our surroundings. Thanks, Anne-Lise.
Date: 8/15/2023 10:33:00 AM
Good match for the image before the poem, Lin. I especially like the personal quote. Your poem was engaging, and the imagery eloquently conveyed. Good entry for the contest, my friend. Good Luck! Bill
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Date: 8/15/2023 11:48:00 AM
I was so happy to have found such an image, Bill. It was exactly what I hoped to have portrayed in the lines about the wandering wind. Thanks so much for your encouragement, Bill.
Date: 8/15/2023 4:58:00 AM
Yeah, but what does he do with all those hats???? Stop it!! Really well done Lin. Could be titled "An Ode to a Blow Hard"
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Date: 8/15/2023 5:02:00 AM
lol John. He and the clothes dryer have a deal. She steals socks and he steals hats. What they do with them is anyone's guess. Your title is a great idea, but contest rules state I must use the "W" word of choice. Love your humor as always.

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