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for Natasha L Scragg's Fairy Tale Contest 5/5/26

Way To Go Cinderella!

With stepsisters both so mean
Cinderella's gloom is keen
Then a cool in-law
Her fairy grandma
Helps her to split the bad scene

In the shoe her foot does slide
She's the real deal, bonified!
She's all that, so fine
The prince shouts, you're mine!
Now sweet love will be their guide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Rodrigues Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 2:45 PM
Love your words…that second verse is fine! ;) Thanks, Robert!
Gorelick Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 1:38 PM
THX, Cinderella is our sister who should always be considered 'with it' and happenin! Fair godmothers rock!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 2:45 PM
Love your words…that second verse is fine! ;) Thanks, Robert!
Godwin Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 6:59 AM
I'm a huge Cinderella fan and this has a nostalgic feel/buzz to it that I'm enjoying. Pardon the word if it's too far from your view of this limerick, but to me this is precious. I wish to email this to my sister so I shall and wanted you to know.
Gorelick Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 11:21 AM
However we might spin it, Cinderella is a sister whose fan base will never dwindle. Glad you liked my take! Give your sister my warm regards, Robert
Scragg Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 1:20 AM
Thank you for entering the contest. Great pair of Limericks :-)
Gorelick Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 10:38 AM
Thank you for the Honorable Mention, a pleasure to contribute!
Anaya Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 6:12 PM
Back with Congratulations, I know you'll be back soon. Make your stay away count! Blessings
Goldsmith Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 1:06 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading these fun 2 writes again. Have a fun day with your win................
Rodgers Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 8:48 AM
Hello Robert, Oh, that easy grin of a story retold around a kitchen table. I like how you let the fairy grandma step in like the cool relative who knows exactly when to intervene. The slipper moment lands with a clean snap with no fuss, just recognition. Like you’re giving Cinderella her own small victory lap. Blessings, Daniel
Goldsmith Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 1:19 PM
Your "Way To Go Cinderella!" are fun Limerick writes. I enjoyed reading these 2. What a great picture you have here. "Good Luck" I also did this fun contest. Have a great/fun day writing away.........
Anaya Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 6:40 PM
Perfect set , flow and rhymes, laughing still, way to go, Robert. Good luck! Feliz Cinco De Mayo!
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