Notes About The Poem

Way of the Poet

A universe jumbles unfinished in the mind
picture upon picture
a laconic dimension of perception
where comprehension hides in brambles
and rubbish churns like a river
emptying into the soul
the murky and the luminous converge
forming an enclosure of concentration
where nothing exists, except focus
time melts away...a word
then another, then another
like falling leaves washed by the wind
carried to the inner eye
read, questioned, reasoned, unleased
spread across a white sheet
where a sentence grows
giving purpose to lucidity
translated by each reader
in their fashion
to be liked or disliked...as the page turns
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 12:41 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful write for Beata’s contest. Blessings to you
Alex Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 7:13 PM
"like falling leaves washed by the wind" -A very beautiful comparison. Congratulations!
Agustin Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 7:51 AM
Congrats! Thanks for your participation, making this poetic occasion jubilant. Belated Poetry Day, dear poet. God bless you.
Neumann Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 3:09 AM
The murky and the luminous converge. I like that. Kai
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 7:10 PM
this was a very well deserved placement in his contest, Frederic. One of yours I had not seen. BIG congrats. I love it.
Allison Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 2:41 PM
I love your perspective on poetry Frederic, many congrats on your win:-0 hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 10:40 AM
You have captured the poet's passionate process of creation so well in this poem, Frederic. A fave for me, and congratulations on your well-deserved podium placement in the contest. Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 10:40 PM
Lovely. Congrats on your win, Frederic.
Gentry Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:44 PM
Congratulations on your win! A thought provoking poem... very impressive write.
Leiser Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 3:07 PM
Deep, contemplative poem, Frederic. Nicely done! Congrats on your win :)
Thomas Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 4:15 PM
My dear Frederic there could not have been a more perfect title for this brilliant piece. I think you've covered all branches of writing here. And I also agree with Miss Leanne below as your words are centuries aged. I do so enjoy your work Frederic.
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 8:58 PM
...are you sure you are not channelling some aloof dead famous poet? I love this, this is the way of a real writer...I have much to learn.
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 8:59 PM
Love the poem read by velvet voice. I daren't load my voice, I'd scare you all away.
Ashley Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 6:34 PM
Every line is simply so poetic, Frederic, in your introspection of inspiration and creativity. You describe the process wondrously. Beautiful and artistic use of imagery and metaphors.. Superb poetry and I loved hearing you recite your poem as well. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
One Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 12:20 PM
You described it so poetically Frederic..
Turner Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 8:10 AM
I know it can be extremely difficult at times, to describe an inspired thought. For me they do not come that often and if I do not work fast, it leaves as quickly as it came. I like your description of the process very much, Frederic. A poet's, poem!
Gauthier Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 10:47 PM
Very interesting poem, Frederic. Love it.
J.T. Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 7:21 PM
This is a very unique perspective; I enjoyed reading it -JT
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