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There was a sailor in a bar downtown Who had a need to be playing around A tightwad was he And frisky was she He gave her a round - she blew the man down August 2, 2018 Sea Tales Limirick Contest By Carolyn Devonshire Fifth Place

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/10/2018 11:53:00 AM

A very clever one, Susan! Janice

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/10/2018 9:34:00 PM

Thank you.

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 8/6/2018 11:12:00 PM

Witty, concise and a delight to read.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/7/2018 2:01:00 AM

I'm new at limiricks. They are fun. :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 8/5/2018 1:43:00 AM

Congratulations, Susan on your well deserved win.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/5/2018 6:53:00 PM

Thank you!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/4/2018 6:10:00 PM

Very witty Susan, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xxx

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/5/2018 6:53:00 PM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2018 5:37:00 PM

HA! Good one, Susan, and big congrats.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/5/2018 6:52:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/4/2018 3:08:00 PM

The pirate's song "Blow the Man Down" kept going through my head as I read your poem, Susan. A fun limerick! Congratulations and thanks for participating in the contest, Carolyn

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/5/2018 6:52:00 PM

Thank you! I'm honored to be on the winners list. It was a fun contest. Thank you for sponsoring.