Susan Gentry Poet Limerick

Way Hey

There was a sailor in a bar downtown
Who had a need to be playing around
A tightwad was he
And frisky was she
He gave her a round - she blew the man down


August 2, 2018


Sea Tales Limirick Contest
By Carolyn Devonshire
Fifth Place

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Janice Canerdy August 10, 2018 at 11:53 AM A very clever one, Susan! Janice Susan Gentry August 10, 2018 at 9:34 PM Thank you.

Geoffrey Brewer August 6, 2018 at 11:12 PM Witty, concise and a delight to read. Susan Gentry August 7, 2018 at 2:01 AM I'm new at limiricks. They are fun. :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy August 5, 2018 at 1:43 AM Congratulations, Susan on your well deserved win. Susan Gentry August 5, 2018 at 6:53 PM Thank you!

Jan Allison August 4, 2018 at 6:10 PM Very witty Susan, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xxx Susan Gentry August 5, 2018 at 6:53 PM Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2018 at 5:37 PM HA! Good one, Susan, and big congrats. Susan Gentry August 5, 2018 at 6:52 PM Thanks, Andrea.

Carolyn Devonshire August 4, 2018 at 3:08 PM The pirate's song "Blow the Man Down" kept going through my head as I read your poem, Susan. A fun limerick! Congratulations and thanks for participating in the contest, Carolyn Susan Gentry August 5, 2018 at 6:52 PM Thank you! I'm honored to be on the winners list. It was a fun contest. Thank you for sponsoring.

Gershon Wolf August 3, 2018 at 4:39 PM Love that ending. Perfect quid pro quo! LOL. Good one, Susan! Best wishes, Gershon Susan Gentry August 5, 2018 at 6:50 PM Thank you! :)

Nette Onclaud August 3, 2018 at 1:48 PM heelarious, susan.. guys shoudn't mess with feisty women and vice versa... win it!... huggs Susan Gentry August 5, 2018 at 6:49 PM Thank you. :)

Charlie Smith August 3, 2018 at 12:06 PM Oh My! Sea Tale Susan, not tail. Good one , best wishes... Susan Gentry August 5, 2018 at 6:49 PM Lol. Thank you.

Rico Leffanta August 2, 2018 at 11:20 PM (in his dreams). Well done! Aloha! Rico Susan Gentry August 5, 2018 at 6:48 PM Thank you.

Charles Messina August 2, 2018 at 9:22 PM Don't think I want to mess around with her...lol Nice limerick, Susan :) Charlie Susan Gentry August 5, 2018 at 6:48 PM Thanks.

Heidi Sands August 2, 2018 at 4:05 PM LOL Good one Susan :) Susan Gentry August 5, 2018 at 6:48 PM Thank you.

Jesse Rowe August 2, 2018 at 2:43 PM Got a chuckle from this. I wasn't expecting that ending.. and I'll probably never think of that song the same now. Susan Gentry August 5, 2018 at 6:47 PM Lol. Thanks.