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I stumble over my thoughts, the way someone stumbles when drunk, my memories are the drink that calls to me, a much happier time, when I was young and you were too. I smile to myself remembering the young girl that I was then, my long dark hair and big brown eyes, brand new glasses that I wore, with rose colored lenses, all the world was blooming right in front of me. I sang to every word, when the radio played songs about us, I couldn't wait to be kissed, by the only one, my heart was promised to. That young girl, quickly matured, now a woman who knew better, than to wear rose colored glasses, I put them into a box for safe keeping. Recently I looked through that box , all the photographs were faded, but the memories had stayed, just as If it were yesterday, when I was young and you were to. My glasses were still there, now tarnished and cracked, but when I put them on, I was amazed at what I could see, you still look so beautiful to me.

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Date: 10/26/2019 6:10:00 PM
Beautiful piece. Very creative. Great pen.
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Date: 11/1/2019 5:39:00 PM
Thanks so much Frank, taking a trip down memory lane. Smiles and tears.
Date: 10/8/2019 11:12:00 AM
Going thru my old LPs, there was Jim and all those photographs and memories. Nicely written poem. Thanks for the memories, especially those that make me cry.
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Date: 11/1/2019 5:40:00 PM
Thanks for commenting DM. I cried, too.
Date: 9/2/2019 2:32:00 PM
Vickie: I need to get me a pair of those glasses. :o) Thanks for sharing that lovely piece with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Date: 9/2/2019 8:19:00 PM
Thanks Buck!
Date: 8/11/2019 1:02:00 PM
A subtle gentleness to this poem that speaks of being at peace with a memory
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 8/11/2019 3:53:00 PM
Thank You Frederic Parker...Memories Are The Best.
Date: 8/10/2019 10:07:00 PM
Delightful, Vickie.
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 8/11/2019 3:54:00 PM
Thank You, Line.
Date: 8/10/2019 2:51:00 PM
WOW! So charming is this.. reminiscing of memories..very apt video, Vickie.
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 8/12/2019 7:20:00 AM
Thank You, Vijay!! Memories Of Young Love, First Love...The Best Love.

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