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Way Back When

I stumble over my thoughts,
the way someone stumbles when drunk,
my memories are the drink that calls to me,
a much happier time, 
when I was young and you were too.

I smile to myself remembering the young girl that I was then,
my long dark hair and big brown eyes,
brand new glasses that I wore,
with rose colored lenses,
all the world was blooming right in front of me.

I sang to every word,
when the radio played songs about us,
I couldn't wait to be kissed,
by the only one, 
my heart was promised to.

That young girl, 
quickly matured,
now a woman who knew better,
than to wear rose colored glasses,
I put them into a box for safe keeping.

Recently I looked through that box ,
all the photographs were faded,
but the memories had stayed,
just as If it were yesterday,
when I was young and you were to.

My glasses were still there,
now tarnished and cracked,
but when I put them on,
I was amazed at what I could see,
you still look so beautiful to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Sheehan Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 6:10 PM
Beautiful piece. Very creative. Great pen.
Thayer Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 5:39 PM
Thanks so much Frank, taking a trip down memory lane. Smiles and tears.
Babbit Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 11:12 AM
Going thru my old LPs, there was Jim and all those photographs and memories. Nicely written poem. Thanks for the memories, especially those that make me cry.
Thayer Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 5:40 PM
Thanks for commenting DM. I cried, too.
Buck Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 2:32 PM
Vickie: I need to get me a pair of those glasses. :o) Thanks for sharing that lovely piece with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck
Thayer Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 8:19 PM
Thanks Buck!
Parker Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 1:02 PM
A subtle gentleness to this poem that speaks of being at peace with a memory
Thayer Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Thank You Frederic Parker...Memories Are The Best.
Gauthier Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 10:07 PM
Delightful, Vickie.
Thayer Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 3:54 PM
Thank You, Line.
Pandit Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 2:51 PM
WOW! So charming is this.. reminiscing of memories..very apt video, Vickie.
Thayer Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 7:20 AM
Thank You, Vijay!! Memories Of Young Love, First Love...The Best Love.
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