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Way Back Then When I Was Ten

Way back then when I was ten the year was nineteen ninety-three, Mom was so proud when I said aloud that I made the school spelling bee. Days of math sums and bubble gums have faded through the years, but I sing along to a certain song and it still brings me to tears. It was a big fad to dress all in plaid and wear a necklace with a peace sign, ponytails and ripped jeans worn by every teen and neon colors were thought to be mighty fine. I loved cassette tapes that let me escape at least for minutes through my headphones, while I would read and write notes in a Mead after school when I was home all alone. Kids shopped the malls and covered their walls with posters from every teen magazine, what made us sob was each new heartthrob from every band, TV show and movie we'd seen. With Rollerblades and a new pair of shades we roamed the sidewalks until it got late, our backpacks were heavy and filled with a bevy of boring English assignments that could wait. For many hours I could stay and sit and play with Nintendo games, stickers and Treasure Trolls, then aside they were tossed and some became lost except for right here in my heart and my soul. That time proved to be the most fun for me O, how I wish that I could relive it again, way back then when I was just ten and the year was nineteen ninety-three.

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Date: 1/9/2021 1:36:00 AM
Wow love ryhme great nastalgia similer to two poems l wrote called ten and recovery sums and bubble gums hee hee love it good times when young l was eighteen then good tomes the minties davidscott
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/4/2023 5:25:00 PM
Thank you, David. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem ... I like writing and reading nostalgic poems like this. Not many poets seem to touch on these types of subjects :)
Date: 6/16/2019 3:02:00 PM
ohh yes, save those precious memories, kelly... such a heartfelt, astounding work... stay child-like!...huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/12/2019 3:28:00 PM
Will do :) Thank you so much for your kind comments on this poem Nette ... hugs :)
Date: 6/12/2018 8:59:00 AM
nerds with words can also be pretty girls with curls..love yur poetry)))
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/31/2018 9:14:00 PM
Yes they definitely can be :) :) Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 1/15/2018 4:24:00 AM
My goodness you are young! How I wish I was as young as you again...time is indeed the most precious commodity. My very warmest regards, Kelly. Your friend. :) john
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/18/2018 8:43:00 PM
Thank you once again for taking the time to read and comment on my poems. I appreciate that so much... I suppose I am still young, yet not as young as I used to be... But, I like to live by the wise words of my Mom as she always says, "You're as young as you feel and age is just a number!" :)
Date: 7/27/2016 9:37:00 PM
You just relived it here and now, and took me along for the ride.Thank You Kelly I remember ever thing you mentioned from a fathers point of view in the seventies.Same show different costumes.My son's generation.We all grow up and we all look homeward Angel but none of us can go home.keep writing.I have come home to poety soup.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/19/2016 6:51:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comments, Michael. It is good to see you back here... I haven't been around much myself lately. Just needed to take a break from writing for awhile.
Date: 7/2/2016 12:20:00 AM
Yes Kelly, it would be nice if we could all relive those days again, they are the best years of our lives, I was raised in the country here in Western Australia and my life was heaven, so I think you have reminded so many people of those times with this brilliant poem, loved it, take care.......Vera
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/20/2016 9:04:00 PM
Thank you for such a lovely comment, Vera... Its a shame that we don't realize when we're young how wonderful those times really are... Please forgive my late reply. I haven't been on Poetry Soup much lately. Just needed to take a break from writing for awhile.
Date: 6/27/2016 12:46:00 AM
just imagine if we could time travel to those days when we were young and still be leaved in everyone.Thank you Kelly!
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Date: 5/29/2016 10:52:00 PM
Very nice...... I don't remember mine.... Where is it gone? Why is it missed? Nowhere to be found in this earthly feast.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/15/2016 10:27:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments. I appreciate it... Our childhoods do go by fast, like the blink of an eye. Too many kids are in a rush to grow up these days and they're going to wonder where those innocent years disappeared to :(
Date: 5/20/2016 7:12:00 AM
Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/9/2016 8:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Funom!
Date: 4/16/2016 6:47:00 PM
wow, Kelly, I was a graduate of 1973 and it had ITS own form of style and entertainment. We always are nostalgic for the time we came from. I think kids from the 80's will relate really well with YOU. They were very similar! I really enjoyed this. Did this contest ever get judged?? I can't even remember
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/5/2016 10:13:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I appreciate that very much, Andrea... I am very nostalgic about my childhood days growing up in the 80's and 90's. I've been wanting to write a poem about it and finally doing that was a lot of fun!... I did finish judging this contest a few months ago and I enjoyed every entry :)
Date: 3/11/2016 4:23:00 PM
Doesn't matter how old you are it seems. If you had a happy childhood the experiences are dear. I was 10 in 1939 and had a happy childhood. My childhood days are still just as vivid and precious as they were when I was 29 or 59 or now. Love this one, Kelly. It connects. Love, daver
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/29/2016 11:44:00 PM
Thank you, Daver. Your comments are much appreciated... I think it is so cool when someone connects with one of my poems. Though not every day of my childhood was happy. But I will only hold onto the good memories :)
Date: 2/29/2016 1:45:00 PM
This is so wonderful, dear Kelly!! Hope it placed really high!! :D :D
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/22/2016 8:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sneha. I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 2/17/2016 5:30:00 PM
This poem was so delightful, and I could so relate to your memories so well, Kelly! And then I was so pleased that you liked my own version of this theme! Thank you again!! :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/7/2016 10:18:00 AM
Thank you, Carrie. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and could relate to it. Writing this was fun as it brought back so many good memories for me... Thank you also for entering the contest with such a great poem :)
Date: 2/17/2016 7:04:00 AM
Beautiful sentiments, Kelly. My daughters had your same experience and you brought to light with your great poem. I wish you well in the contest.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/5/2016 7:53:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comments on this poem, Ralph. I appreciate you taking the time to stop by and read :)
Date: 2/7/2016 8:25:00 AM
I think that most of us will agree that there is nothing lovelier than our childhood years! You make yours sound delightful and carefree, Kelly! I still have a necklace with a peace sign, but from my late teenage years, not when I was ten:) ~ Warm regards // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/17/2016 2:35:00 PM
I very much appreciate your comments, Paul. All I can say is thank you :) ... Peace signs were a big fad in the 90's. We wore them on t-shirts, keychains, earrings and necklaces. And yes I still have mine too! :)
Date: 2/7/2016 5:12:00 AM
A very wonderful childhood memory expressed very creatively in this excellent poem of yours my dear friend, Kelly. I'm so glad and thankful to have time to read it this weekend. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much also for stopping by on my poem. love lots, Leonora
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/17/2016 2:20:00 PM
You're very welcome, Leonora. I do appreciate you stopping by my poems as well. All I can say is thank you! :)
Date: 2/5/2016 12:00:00 PM
this would win if it were not you contest, kel... a spin of lovely sentiments...greeat to read you again!.. huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/10/2016 10:58:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly, Nette. I appreciate that very much... hugs :)
Date: 2/3/2016 9:46:00 AM
lovely nostalga Kelly, so well penned telling your story so well makes one think of life at similar years, a blessing to read. Hope things ok with you, back on PS again hopefully for good, will send you soupmail to explain things, blessings, Gordon
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/9/2016 10:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gordon. I'm happy that you enjoyed it... Things are going well for me. Hope they are for you too... It is nice to see you back on PS :)
Date: 2/1/2016 1:02:00 PM
Wonderful write Kelly. Enjoyed the flashback ... your lovely words made me remember mine. Hugs, Bobby
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/9/2016 12:46:00 AM
Writing this poem brought back so many good memories for me. I'm glad that it had the same affect on you... I appreciate your nice comments, Bobby. Thank you so much!
Date: 2/1/2016 6:43:00 AM
Good morning Kelly. Such a wonderful poem of the memories of childhood. And so well written. This one was a joy to read, my friend.... Robert.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/8/2016 3:43:00 PM
Good afternoon Robert. Thank you so much for your kind comments. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. It was a joy to write :)
Date: 1/30/2016 12:52:00 AM
Oh...to be a kid again. Such lovely memories, Kelly. Thank you for sharing
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/7/2016 8:22:00 PM
You're very welcome, Elaine. Thanks for reading :)
Date: 1/29/2016 4:43:00 AM
That second to last stanza is an absolute knock out! That physically lost, but forever clung too, beautiful. Just one such moment, in this dazzling poem.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/7/2016 8:14:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly, Scott. I really appreciate it :)
Date: 1/28/2016 1:39:00 PM
Ahh!! How inviting is this one..Reads like a winner for the contest..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/7/2016 7:51:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. I had fun writing this poem and it makes me smile knowing others are enjoying it as well :)
Date: 1/28/2016 8:14:00 AM
The poem is beautifully nostalgic. Great internal rhyme too:)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/6/2016 9:15:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Jo!
Date: 1/28/2016 4:12:00 AM
I loved reading this Kelly. It reminded me of time spent with my children. You can't belp get caught up in their excitement!#7
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/6/2016 9:07:00 PM
I am happy that you liked this poem, Connie. It was fun for me to write and recall so many good things from my childhood :)
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