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Waves Rippling

Ticklish wispy whiskers I hear your faint whispers In the breeze of night Longing to be held tight At first an echo soft and gentle Sweetly sentimental Why do you tremble with fear That it might all soon disappear Like a sand castle on the beach Wash it all away out of reach Hush hush now treasure today Keep your worries far at bay AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on January 13, 2020

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Date: 1/19/2020 8:13:00 AM
Line, lovely and congratulations on your win in the contest _Constance
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/19/2020 9:34:00 PM
Thanks, Constance, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.
Date: 1/19/2020 7:03:00 AM
A deep insight into your heart.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/19/2020 9:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, SO. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/15/2020 10:50:00 AM
Really nice, LG. Poignant!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/15/2020 2:27:00 PM
Thank you, Kurt, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Date: 1/15/2020 5:40:00 AM
There's a mystique about this piece, the visual is super on this one; easily imagined. Enjoyed.
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Date: 1/15/2020 2:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/13/2020 5:43:00 PM
Delicate and beautiful.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/15/2020 2:27:00 PM
Thank you, Caren. Most appreciated.

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