Waves

waves furl and unfurl my feet firmly in the sand the passing of time AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on January 26, 2019 for contest OCEAN WAVES HAIKU sponsored by TANIA KITCHIN

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/31/2019 11:10:00 PM

...and now I see all the comments that have 'covered so much ground' since I visited last... Congrats on your win in the contest with this artistic write, my friend! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/1/2019 2:57:00 PM

Thanks for your most appreciated re-visit and comment, Gershon.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2019 6:44:00 PM

what a great contrast in your KU!! Congrats on the win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/30/2019 9:10:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/29/2019 12:22:00 PM

Back with congratulations, Line....very much deserved. Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/29/2019 5:48:00 PM

Much appreciated, Paul. Thanks.

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 1/29/2019 10:45:00 AM

Congrats, Line, for your well-deserved win and thx for noting my win as well - Bob

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/29/2019 5:48:00 PM

Thanks, Robert. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/29/2019 8:12:00 AM

- Congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/29/2019 8:25:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 1/29/2019 5:38:00 AM

Lovely Haiku Line, I can almost feel the sea gently bathing my toes, though it would be very cold at this time of year, haha! Congrats and kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/29/2019 8:26:00 AM

It's meant to imagine at its ideal condition, Ann, preferably steamy summer. LOL

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/29/2019 4:54:00 AM

Back with congratulations Line. Tom.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/29/2019 8:26:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. Most appreciated.

Joseph May

Date: 1/28/2019 10:42:00 PM

Nicely done.... Congrats on your win Line..

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/29/2019 8:27:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph. Much appreciated.

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/28/2019 8:11:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Line! I really loved this one, and wished it was a top winner.. ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/28/2019 9:30:00 PM

Thanks, Laura. Lots of good ones in the mix.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/28/2019 7:43:00 PM

Lovely flow and imagery Line, congratulations on your winning placement!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/28/2019 7:57:00 PM

Thank you, Tania. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/28/2019 7:31:00 PM

Love "furl and unfurl" Well done!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/1/2019 4:05:00 PM

You have unfurled another great win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/28/2019 7:40:00 PM

Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/27/2019 8:13:00 AM

I truly enjoyed your haiku, Line. We humans have no option but to go by what earth has to offer; meanwhile time goes by without stopping, very much like ocean waves. Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/27/2019 11:37:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paul. Most appreciated.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/27/2019 6:14:00 AM

Excellent hakiu Line, I spend many a happy hour at the beach. Good luck. Tom.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/27/2019 11:38:00 AM

Absolutely, Tom. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/26/2019 10:32:00 PM

Very well written. I enjoyed reading this poem.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/27/2019 11:38:00 AM

Thanks, Valerie. Most appreciated.

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/26/2019 9:37:00 PM

Excellent haiku, Line! Should do well in the contest! :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/27/2019 11:38:00 AM

Thanks, Laura. Most appreciated.

Bobby May

Date: 1/26/2019 9:32:00 PM

Very nice my friend, this is a winner!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/27/2019 11:39:00 AM

Thanks so much for your lovely compliment, Bobby.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/26/2019 9:05:00 PM

Great haiku, Line! Leaves the reader's imagination (mine, in this case) so much room to roam. Covers a lot of ground, sand and water! G.L. in Tania's contest. Best wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/27/2019 11:40:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Gershon