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Waves - collaboration with Darren White

Sound currents invisible caresses on sensitive skin resonate Rays of sunlight dazzled display adorns brown curls radiate Pirouette whirls personal cyclone lifts off surges up crests the arc internal elation revels in the moment timeless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/12/2019 3:42:00 PM
Good one Sara and Darren it all holds together well.
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Sara Ella
Date: 8/12/2019 9:04:00 PM
Thank you, Eric :)
Date: 12/2/2018 5:32:00 AM
Nice one a very good Poem look forward to more!
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Sara Ella
Date: 12/2/2018 9:20:00 AM
Thank you Billy! :) I enjoyed writing this one with Darren very much.
Date: 11/21/2018 1:51:00 PM
What an unusual and imaginative poem! I can see it all. You two obviously work very well together.
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Date: 1/23/2018 1:48:00 PM
Timeless, in a world of ones own.
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Sara Ella
Date: 1/23/2018 11:13:00 PM
That’s exactly right Patricia :)
Date: 1/15/2018 2:50:00 PM
Oh this is so mind relaxing. I really enjoyed it. Awesome job Sara and Darren! Hugs and smiles :)
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Sara Ella
Date: 1/15/2018 4:05:00 PM
Thank You Akkina! We had a lot of fun writing it! :)
Date: 1/12/2018 12:43:00 PM
Is cool, isn't it, my friend? I love it, and it was fantastic again, working with you <3
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Sara Ella
Date: 1/12/2018 6:38:00 PM
Thank you my friend :) Writing poetry with you is so much fun! <3
Date: 1/8/2018 5:21:00 AM
The opening stanza is fantastic...Lovely poem...All the best to both of you
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Sara Ella
Date: 1/8/2018 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Arturo! :)
Date: 1/7/2018 9:52:00 PM
What a beautiful lovely poem, great collab!! Loved this.
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Sara Ella
Date: 1/7/2018 9:54:00 PM
Thank you Art! We had fun making this :)