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Wave and Shore

I am a wave. From far I come to you Swimming with desire. In wild curls I come, Riding with music, Travelling on sunbeams. Within my hidden folds, I carry the thoughts of love, Wishing to rest on the shore. Lashing playfully, I come, Looping into a sensational hug! But how sad, I can only embrace you Just for a brief moment! Over our heads, seagulls wing. Around us, soapy foams giggle. In wild ecstasy, I roar, Crashing my head on your breast. But I am made to drift away, Leaving nothing behind, But a stretch of dampened sand, Reminding that we have once met. Can I ever hold you again? Wish I could once more, Rush into your arms. Sometimes I feel, I am on an eternal journey. With desires unappeased, I continue traveling miles. Let us be a pair of seagulls, Flying in tandem, you forever, Staying close to me, With your wind under my wings!

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/9/2023 7:15:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD, your awesome poems that have been entered into Poetry Soups Anthology and your poem being on the first page. We are going out to a Christening, and I'm late as usual, will continue with comments to you tomorrow Valsa, HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.

Ricky Muse

Date: 12/6/2023 6:05:00 PM

Great poem lady. Congratulations on your placement in the latest anthology. All the best...................peace!

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 9/19/2023 1:25:00 AM

This is another beautiful poem of yours, I enjoyed reading. Well written!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/18/2023 5:08:00 PM

Hello Valsa, Oh congratulations on your POTD I love the waves rushing to the shore. It is a beautiful sound so peaceful. Hugs. /Darlene/

Harveen Kaur

Date: 9/9/2023 9:24:00 AM

Wow, such a lovely poem! I admire your creativity and as a beginner here, it was a great learning experience.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/18/2023 12:30:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/17/2023 9:10:00 PM

Beautiful Poem Valsa. Congratulations.

Valsa George
Date: 8/18/2023 4:57:00 AM

Thank you so much dear friend !

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/17/2023 6:17:00 PM

Your imagery is truly exceptional, Valsa. Your masterful command of language and a keen eye for detail as well as your writing is highly skillful, captivating the reader from start to finish. Congratulations on the recognition as the POTD!

Valsa George
Date: 8/18/2023 4:57:00 AM

Thank you for your uplifting comment !However I cannot come anywhere near you... ! But your words of great praise have delighted me a lot.

John Hamilton

Date: 8/17/2023 4:48:00 PM

What a beautiful write full of imagery, congrats on a worthy potd!

Valsa George
Date: 8/18/2023 4:53:00 AM

So happy with your lovely comment ! Thanks a lot dear John

Paige Hind

Date: 8/16/2023 5:27:00 PM

Lovely take on 'waving' oceans! I liked it!

Valsa George
Date: 8/18/2023 4:53:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Paige

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 8/15/2023 11:00:00 PM

Brilliant! Enjoyed reading this poem. Congratulations on your POTD. Well written.

Valsa George
Date: 8/15/2023 11:24:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Jeanette for your Congratulations and great appreciation !

Susan Lawrence

Date: 8/15/2023 10:15:00 PM

Just beautiful dear Valsa ! Wild, sensual, inviting, becoming , and longing for more ! Excited to read this again ! A fav! Congratulations on your imagination and POTD !! Hugs always, Susan :)

Valsa George
Date: 8/15/2023 10:56:00 PM

When you FAVE this , I feel thrilled ! Thanks a lot dear Susan for your kind comment and beautiful words of appreciation.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/15/2023 9:46:00 PM

exceptional poetry Valsa, your vivid imagery is just amazing, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Valsa George
Date: 8/15/2023 10:53:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Jan. Glad that u find this 'exceptional'. Love and hugs !

Mark Toney

Date: 8/15/2023 7:52:00 PM

Valsa, I love the ocean upon the sky vibe, “Over our heads, seagulls wing” and “Let us be a pair of seagulls, Flying in tandem …” Also the thought of being taken back on the tide, “But I am made to drift away, Leaving nothing behind, But a stretch of dampened sand, Reminding that we have once met.” A Fave for me so I can surf your wave again and again. Congratulations on Poem of the Day!

Valsa George
Date: 8/15/2023 10:51:00 PM

Mark.... I feel greatly honored that you have faved my poem. Thanks a lot dear friend for your highly appreciative comment.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/15/2023 7:49:00 PM

lovely poem, congratulations on pOTD and i known this will take a place.

Valsa George
Date: 8/15/2023 10:48:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Eve. Though the poem didn't get qualified in the contest, it got this recognition and I am so happy !

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/15/2023 5:41:00 PM

Waves are like emotions, they touch the heart evenly, leaving a lasting impression. Embracing for a moment, would be enough to last a lifetime. This is beautiful and tender, with a gentle longing. I'm placing this in my favorites, to read again and again. Congratulations Valsa, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Valsa George
Date: 8/15/2023 10:46:00 PM

Dear Brandy, I feel so honored that you have included this in your Fave list. Your comments are always a pleasure to read, dear friend. Shall visit your page soon

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/15/2023 4:38:00 PM

Congratulations, Dear Valsa, on your poem with stunning images! Great personification! Love ~ Mala

Valsa George
Date: 8/15/2023 10:43:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Mala for your lovely comment !

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/15/2023 1:44:00 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved honor of being awarded POTD!! This is a truly excellent new creation. I say WELL DONE AND BRAVO and as I add this to my fav list. God bless.

Valsa George
Date: 8/15/2023 10:42:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Robert ! I feel honored that this is added to your Fave .

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/15/2023 1:41:00 PM

I can hear the ocean foam, giggle. Your description of the wave is majestic. It's too bad the ocean was unappeased and wanted something else, like most still soul-searching. Congratulations on the POTD, Valsa! Hugs ~Anaya

Valsa George
Date: 8/15/2023 10:39:00 PM

You have come up with a sweet comment. Thanks a lot dear Anaya. I am happy my poem has got the recognition of POTD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2023 12:50:00 PM

wow, this is FANTASTIC. I'm going to fave this beauty. By the way, if you put a quote above it and are able to add a picture at the top, Constance will score it really hight.

Valsa George
Date: 8/15/2023 10:26:00 PM

Thanks a lot for your kind suggestion. Actually I was in a hurry to go out on a family function. Thanks a lot for your Fave and comment dear Andrea ! I wonder why Constance has disqualified my poem without giving it even a special mention. Quote and picture are not mandatory. All the contests are judged on a single person's discretion!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/15/2023 9:08:00 AM

I'm 'waving' Hi and Congrats for your richly deserved honor of POTD, Valsa! Cheers, Gershon

Valsa George
Date: 8/15/2023 10:24:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Gershon. Glad you liked it ! I am waving back to you in joy and gratefulness !

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/15/2023 8:59:00 AM

This is absolutely beautiful. I love it and fave it. Congratulations on POTD, Valsa. Stunning poem :)

Valsa George
Date: 8/15/2023 10:23:00 PM

Thank you for your FAVE dear Akkina... ! Thanks also for your visit to my page.

Bill Baker

Date: 8/15/2023 8:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD! I'm wave -ing to you. :-) Lovely imagery, Valsa. Enjoy your day of recognition. Bill

Valsa George
Date: 8/15/2023 10:21:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Bill ! I am waving back to you in joy and gratitude !

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/15/2023 8:38:00 AM

You deserve this POTD. Great personification.

Valsa George
Date: 8/15/2023 10:20:00 PM

So happy to see you back after a gap, dear Victor. Hope you are back to health. I wanted to soupmail you. Then I thought probably you'll be under rest and didn't want to disturb you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/15/2023 8:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Love It. Now I feel like a "Wave." Have a blessed day with your wonderful win................

Valsa George
Date: 8/15/2023 10:17:00 PM

Paula dear, So happy for your comment ! Thanks a lot !