Notes About The Poem

August- 4-2025

Resubmitted for 2025 Marathon Mile. 2 Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Mark Toney

~ FIRST PLACE~

Trophy Winner in the Contest


 

Premiere Contest WinnerWave and Shore

I am a wave. From far I come to you Swimming with desire. In wild curls I come, Riding with music, Travelling on sunbeams. Within my hidden folds, I carry the thoughts of love, Wishing to rest on the shore. Lashing playfully, I come, Looping into a sensational hug! But how sad, I can only embrace you Just for a brief moment! Over our heads, seagulls wing. Around us, soapy foams giggle. In wild ecstasy, I roar, Crashing my head on your breast. But I am made to drift away, Leaving nothing behind, But a stretch of dampened sand, Reminding that we have once met. Can I ever hold you again? Wish I could once more, Rush into your arms. Sometimes I feel, I am on an eternal journey. With desires unappeased, I continue traveling miles. Let us be a pair of seagulls, Flying in tandem, you forever, Staying close to me, With your wind under my wings!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

123
Ray Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 7:50 AM
I did not come to praise an award but the delicious quill that serves a Master....truly line by line captivating every step along this path that swept me deeper with every footfall....
George Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 8:42 PM
Thanks a lot dear Timothy for the wonderful acknowledgement given to this poem. Even I like it . But only once in a while my quill translates my feelings into effective verse.
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 7:13 PM
Back at this one again. It is now listed as your best poem at Soup. Still loving it!
Ashley Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 9:38 AM
Dearest Valsa, it’s a joy to come back to this potent, poignant poem, so representative of your beautiful and soulful poetry. This piece grips my heart and imagination in yearning yet tender ways. Congratulations for your exceptional run and final placement in Mark’s marathon contest. I’m honored to share the podium with you, my sweet poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 10:37 PM
Hearty congratulations to you.
Gauthier Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:30 PM
Lovely, Valsa ~ congrats on your fine placement in Mark's Marathon. Well done ~
Watts Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 12:59 AM
Hi Valsa What a delightful poem to read as your description of a wave is so apt and I felt sorry for the wave unable to stay once it embraced the shore Well done and Congratukations on you placing Cheers Christine
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 12:21 AM
I read a former comment of mine down here from Aug. And I made a typo and don't even know what I had meant to say previously. Anyway. Congrats to you in this marathon. You are a stunning poet, Valsa.
Toney Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 3:05 PM
Valsa, congratulations on your Top 15 placement in my 2025 Poetry Marathon FINAL! Thank you so much for contributing to the success of the contest. The poems of the 37 qualifiers can be accessed from my current "Finish Line" blog post. Time to take off those running shoes and give those feet a rest!
George Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 1:18 AM
Never thought I would reach so much. Thanks a lot dear poet friend for the placement given. I consider it as an acknowledgement for my humble poetic talents. Dear Toney, thanks a lot for the efficient conduct of the contest and your timely boost through your poems on marathon and updating us with information through your blogs.
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 1:58 PM
So beat congrats on the trophy win
Ashley Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 7:47 AM
Dearest Valsa, I am swept away by the poetic beauty of the waves, sand and wind all combining in your stunning verse to create such a sensual mood, a wanton embrace, a lovesome plea! Exquisite expression and imagery stirs the depth and breadth of my heart and soul. A fav for me! Congratulations for your golden trophy win in Mark's contest. Well-deserved, my sweet and talented poet friend. Your poetic artistry outshines the sun itself! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 11:47 PM
Congratulations on your first place podium win.
Guptar Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 7:55 AM
What a lovely poetical gem! Congratulations, dear Valsa on your top win in this contest with this superb metaphorical poem. It sticks in the mind long after reading it, perhaps until the end of one of one`s journey. Wishing you a cheerful day.
Poet Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 4:11 AM
Valsa, I'm so happy for you that you won the contest trophy with this lovely poem; this is a fave.
Drowley Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 5:05 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful first place win!
La France Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:38 PM
Valsa, congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem, I love it, a FAV, blessings, Constance
Toney Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:32 PM
Valsa, congratulations on your first-place win on Mile 2 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. A Fav poem for me! Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 3 has already started.
George Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 7:38 PM
Thank you so much dear Mark Toney for this great recognition. I feel so much excited and honored!
poemtheart Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 1:53 AM
Absolutely fantastic piece of work..! keep writing :)
Richards Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 9:28 AM
Exquisite and sensual. Even the shape of the words on the page is undulating. Beautiful poetry, Valsa :)
Proxenos Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 7:15 AM
Congratulations on POTD, your awesome poems that have been entered into Poetry Soups Anthology and your poem being on the first page. We are going out to a Christening, and I'm late as usual, will continue with comments to you tomorrow Valsa, HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.
Evans Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 6:05 PM
Great poem lady. Congratulations on your placement in the latest anthology. All the best...................peace!
Meadows Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 1:25 AM
This is another beautiful poem of yours, I enjoyed reading. Well written!
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 5:08 PM
Hello Valsa, Oh congratulations on your POTD I love the waves rushing to the shore. It is a beautiful sound so peaceful. Hugs. /Darlene/
Kaur Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 9:24 AM
Wow, such a lovely poem! I admire your creativity and as a beginner here, it was a great learning experience.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 12:30 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
Volumes Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 9:10 PM
Beautiful Poem Valsa. Congratulations.
George Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 4:57 AM
Thank you so much dear friend !
123
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace