Wave

A WAVE

Love
A nest
A love nest
Just two people
Care for each other
Just two in all the world
The rest?   Like wild animals
But the two put out vibrations
And     there is visible evidence 
Have they made a difference?   But of course!

The local savages are curious
How strange the nest-people are acting
They actually share their food
And    are constantly hugging
They seldom yell and scream
Talk by the campfire
“Should we kill them?”
“Let them be!”
Says Oop
Love?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/3/2010 7:24:00 AM
Times have changed but the local savages are still a lot of fun. Good to see you posting. "Let Them Be" is a good philosophy for all of us. Vince
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Date: 12/3/2010 4:19:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today. I enjoyed reading it Daver. May you find great joy this holiday season. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:46:00 PM
Hey, this is very interesting how you put it like back in cave man days or something. The evolution of nesting! Keep those new posts coming, DAVER! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/2/2010 1:54:00 PM
Obviously written by someone who has loved deeply, Dave.. Truly lovely and realistic.. Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:38:00 AM
Good Morning, Daver you will always amaze me with the style fo your etheree. By the way, I say ""let them be"" j.k. enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:27:00 AM
Some people feel resentment when they watch others sharing love and happiness. I'm glad "Oop" decided to "Let them be!" We should take joy in the happiness of others. God bless you for sharing this delightful and insightful poem, Daver! Hope your love nest is filled with joy throughout the holidays. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:17:00 AM
Smile ~ Very intriguing & yet lovely "My Dear Friend, Daver Austin!!!'" ~ But I humbly ask, can one or many kill, "Pure & Undefiled 'Love'?" ~ For, "'God Is Love' &, 'He, Is Eternal!!!'" ~ Smile, my soul feels "The Light" inside of this wonderful poe; it is very beautiful ~ Hope "Your Brightness" is well &, "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'My Dear Friend,' Aside The Embering Hearts Camp Fires of, 'Beautiful Love;' Bye!":) ~
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