Wave

A WAVE Love A nest A love nest Just two people Care for each other Just two in all the world The rest? Like wild animals But the two put out vibrations And there is visible evidence Have they made a difference? But of course! The local savages are curious How strange the nest-people are acting They actually share their food And are constantly hugging They seldom yell and scream Talk by the campfire “Should we kill them?” “Let them be!” Says Oop Love?

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 12/3/2010 7:24:00 AM

Times have changed but the local savages are still a lot of fun. Good to see you posting. "Let Them Be" is a good philosophy for all of us. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/3/2010 4:19:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today. I enjoyed reading it Daver. May you find great joy this holiday season. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2010 8:46:00 PM

Hey, this is very interesting how you put it like back in cave man days or something. The evolution of nesting! Keep those new posts coming, DAVER! Luv, Andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/2/2010 1:54:00 PM

Obviously written by someone who has loved deeply, Dave.. Truly lovely and realistic.. Love, Audrey

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2010 8:38:00 AM

Good Morning, Daver you will always amaze me with the style fo your etheree. By the way, I say ""let them be"" j.k. enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/2/2010 8:27:00 AM

Some people feel resentment when they watch others sharing love and happiness. I'm glad "Oop" decided to "Let them be!" We should take joy in the happiness of others. God bless you for sharing this delightful and insightful poem, Daver! Hope your love nest is filled with joy throughout the holidays. Love, Carolyn

John Rhinem

Date: 12/2/2010 8:17:00 AM

Smile ~ Very intriguing & yet lovely "My Dear Friend, Daver Austin!!!'" ~ But I humbly ask, can one or many kill, "Pure & Undefiled 'Love'?" ~ For, "'God Is Love' &, 'He, Is Eternal!!!'" ~ Smile, my soul feels "The Light" inside of this wonderful poe; it is very beautiful ~ Hope "Your Brightness" is well &, "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'My Dear Friend,' Aside The Embering Hearts Camp Fires of, 'Beautiful Love;' Bye!":) ~