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look into the eyes cries within the soul as feelings abort drops of emotions as hurt falls down the child inside vunerable and weak in a collection of the many faces from years gone bye upon the face of love was the one who cried suffering weakness soft feelings a heart blue cold with aching screams falling dark black curtains inside when love died in clouded vision a chill wind blows upon the face in a deep cold breeze rippling shivers to the bone silently waterfalls downwards raindrops crystal dropping explode bursting inner house reflection heart rotting inside hurt shining out inner pain housed in deep chambers the house of pain suffering engineered waterworks controlled leaks emotions fractured heart's forsaken face cold in the eyes bitterly cries then weeps bitter sweet lemon arid taste tasteless heartbreak love

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Date: 9/11/2013 7:04:00 AM
Quite you went through all the emotions in this one Liam, quite an intense piece.. I enjoyed it :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/11/2013 3:59:00 PM
WILMA THANK YOU FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/9/2013 9:25:00 AM
Sweet, sour...such is love whether we like it or not. Intense work here.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/9/2013 3:24:00 PM
ALMOST SOUNDS FOOD LIKE THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/9/2013 8:39:00 AM
Another good one thanks for sharing
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/9/2013 3:23:00 PM
THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME DEEPLY APPRECIATED BEAUTIFUL COMMENT
Date: 9/9/2013 6:53:00 AM
Maybe we could mix the other ingredients of life such as honey to lemon and make the best yummy muffin cake of happiness ever.Heartwrenching...but beautiful.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/10/2013 5:52:00 AM
THAT SOUNDS YUMMY HAHA THANK YOU FOR THE SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL COMMENT HEARTFELT APPRECIATED

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