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Waterway

"You drown not by falling in a river, but by staying submerged in it.”

A gentle mist
billows above the man-made pond
that spawns a rippling

sorrel-dusky brook
that ebbs and widens as it becomes
a river.

The runnel is dark rust colors,
it is restful but unquiet,
as its flow

softly murmers.
The tributary sits next to a parking lot.
A car's yellow-

white headlights
are bright orbs six feet
above the rivulet;

the lights
penetrate the early morning
as two approaching comets...

Hot water
pours into the tooth colored tub,
it rises;

Irish feet
with puffy soft ankles
step into the bath,

the knees bend
as the hands grasp the tub's sides-
she plops heavily

into the bathwater,
she thinks that the thud disturbs
the tenants below...

never a sound from them.
Her legs curl in Indian style,
the warmth comforts...

The river, yes, is restful;
and twisted, bent branches of trees,
thin, small and dove brown,

adorn the dirt banks,
reach over the rill-
they are knowing spectators...

and she soaks,
and she becomes cleaner;
she levitates, like the aurora's brume...

The river winds
throughout the towns and cities in which she walks, before the sea captures...

it is in some places
shallow, she can see the sandy bottom
is the tint of sunshine;

the river
seems to always be near her...
and the river brings her home.


January 1, 2022

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Date: 1/5/2022 8:56:00 AM
Hi Jennifer. I love your poem. Powerful images created in my mind. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/2/2022 4:00:00 AM
I set aside some time this morning to read the list of winners in Brian's recent contest and have been blown away by the works. Your poem is no exception Jennifer. A big Wow! from me. Such brilliant images that (and pardon the pun) flow beautifully. I think the poem requires and deserves more than one read and no doubt each reader may have their own interpretations. Such is the beauty of a poem. This poem. Cheers - Gary
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