Watershed Thunder

Watershed thunder 

Rise up the hill transformed by illusions, 
majestic mountains tells a  story.
intrigued  to us this ancient  world,
to celebrate this natural  glory   

Boasting  with  eagles  of  great flight,
waterfalls drool like jaggered  curtains, 
draped in rainbows  of colour  bright,

White thunder roars with sock - like feet.
pounding the rocks with erratic blows,
repeating the waves of history,
to a coastal foundry of the  sea,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Palli Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 12:57 AM
Amazing write! Can see hear and feel the scene! Love it.
Ashley Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 1:03 PM
Oh Michael, your imagery is vibrant and amazing! I can see the scene and hear the roar and feel the spray of the waterfall. Your second verse is stunning! I love the story that your poem tells. Excellent write! :)
Downing  Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 8:44 PM
Fabulous work Michael! Waterfalls drool, I love it :)
Bell Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 2:31 AM
Thanks ever so much for the comment Akkina --- hugs :)
Sands Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 2:20 PM
This is beautiful Michael. I love the line about the waterfalls. Well done :)
Bell Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 3:19 AM
Thank you, Heidi, always good to hear from you appreciate the comment
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