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Watershed Thunder

Watershed thunder Rise up the hill transformed by illusions, majestic mountains tells a story. intrigued to us this ancient world, to celebrate this natural glory Boasting with eagles of great flight, waterfalls drool like jaggered curtains, draped in rainbows of colour bright, White thunder roars with sock - like feet. pounding the rocks with erratic blows, repeating the waves of history, to a coastal foundry of the sea,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/1/2017 12:57:00 AM
Amazing write! Can see hear and feel the scene! Love it.
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Date: 8/28/2017 1:03:00 PM
Oh Michael, your imagery is vibrant and amazing! I can see the scene and hear the roar and feel the spray of the waterfall. Your second verse is stunning! I love the story that your poem tells. Excellent write! :)
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Date: 8/23/2017 8:44:00 PM
Fabulous work Michael! Waterfalls drool, I love it :)
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Michael Bell
Date: 8/24/2017 2:31:00 AM
Thanks ever so much for the comment Akkina --- hugs :)
Date: 8/21/2017 2:20:00 PM
This is beautiful Michael. I love the line about the waterfalls. Well done :)
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Michael Bell
Date: 8/24/2017 3:19:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi, always good to hear from you appreciate the comment

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