Water's Life, and Seems Alive

Waves on the rocks 
a'crashing
In it human feet go 
splashing
And elsewhere in the 
swollen river
'gator tails go thrashing
Water may be stagnant 
or it may be thus moving

Sometimes softly 
dripping
at times forcefully 
gushing
In brooks babbling
In streams gurgling
In springs bubbling
In rivers running

From faucets freely 
flowing
or from pipes coercingly 
spurting
At times noisily sloshing
But in lakes musically 
rippling

In it diving and wading
In it refreshing bathing
Or spic and span 
cleansing, rinsing
In it slow sailing or 
speedy surfing
Fishermen fishing or 
busy boating

Ah water, through cracks 
seeping
From waterfalls 
cascading
As rainwater splattering
From sprinklers 
sprinkling.
From hoses spattering
From rooftops streaming.

In whirlpools swiftly 
swirling
From taps simply trickling
Elsewhere rushing, 
whooshing

Ah yes water is life, 
water tis a böon
except when it goes 
flooding, drowning
or tsunami sea-quaking! 
Then only it becomes a 
bane
as it drags dreams and 
dreamers
down the drain! 

But oughtn't we be 
preserving
instead of forever 
polluting
This precious liquid so 
valuable to life
Oughtn't we be saving? 
Instead of negligent 
wasting?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/12/2014 8:21:00 PM
Brilliant point magnificently executed. Bravo!!
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Date: 4/14/2014 7:51:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem immensely. And it is a shame to waste it. And water can be calming as you say or a disaster. Thank you for commenting on my poem. Enjoy your day!!
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Date: 1/31/2014 9:25:00 AM
S Z K. , :) thank you for the wonderful winning poem. Enjoy your day. Love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 1/31/2014 8:02:00 AM
wonderful and impressive write and congrats on the win, Zaynub
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Date: 1/28/2014 1:20:00 PM
S Z K., , <3<3*CONGRATULATIONS, I THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST. Take care ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/18/2014 2:50:00 PM
S.zaynub, good use of contrasting ways we see water, good message and the end and good use of form. Congratulations on your win. Thanks much for entering my contest.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 1/21/2014 8:06:00 AM
My fond tnx sheri 4 d win acknowldgment
Date: 1/1/2014 1:12:00 PM
lovely write with a great message
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Date: 1/1/2014 11:25:00 AM
very interesting poem,,such truth here,, well written,,enjoyed reading this...
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Date: 1/1/2014 11:02:00 AM
what a GOOD write it made me smile, people are not paying any attention in the western world we are so lucky. Yet, so many foolishly by bottled water!! They pay more per gallon of water than they do for gas and they don't realize fracking is polluting the water table for more oil? gas? fuel? Water is OUR primary fuel for life! Light & Love
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Date: 12/27/2013 6:44:00 PM
ALSO WANTED TO SAY MERRY CHRISTMAS IT MAY BE LATE BUT I HAVE NOT BEEN WELL. STILL IT IS HEART FELT WELL
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Date: 12/27/2013 6:43:00 PM
I feel this write as though i were at home by the water i miss so much, wading into the wet warm oregon waters with my toes emersed in the sand. i grew up here the wind rushing against the shore, and hearing the ship horns off in the distance. loved this very much. thank you cheri
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Date: 12/27/2013 5:46:00 PM
S. Z.... Hope you had a wonderful Christmas with the family. This is very deep and moving... Like the epic line... Drag dreams and dreamers down the drain.. <--- Awesome alliterated line... (9 soup mail)) LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2013 1:25:00 PM
Without water there be no life, A very heartfelt expressed poem,nice rhyme and flow,I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Erich
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Date: 12/26/2013 11:44:00 AM
waters' mobility leading to its importance well constructed nice finale Mkie
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Date: 12/25/2013 9:53:00 PM
Thnx for your visit, friend. I liked your poem very much..its theme, the imagery, the vocabulary were all excellent!!
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Date: 12/25/2013 9:52:00 PM
Nicely done. Sounds very Dr. Seuss inspired. Good job
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Date: 12/25/2013 10:42:00 AM
well done! I love water and here it flows so easily! Thank you for writing this beautyful poem
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Date: 12/25/2013 9:43:00 AM
It's beautiful! I love the way you gave life to the poem, well done! Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/25/2013 7:16:00 AM
Tis the season of giving and thanks for sharing. I enjoyed your poem and I really like the Flow :) Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/25/2013 7:12:00 AM
Beautiful, poem! It flows smoothly , just like water. It is good to stop sometimes and speculate on the essential things in life,,, giving them personality like you did. I salute your poetic soul.....Shams
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Date: 12/25/2013 7:10:00 AM
I agree, water is life, Zaynub
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Date: 12/25/2013 6:19:00 AM
A great poem about our greatest resource which we all take for granted. You have covered so many uses here, very well done. Merry Christmas, Carl
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