Water's Life, and Seems Alive

Waves on the rocks 
a'crashing
In it human feet go 
splashing
And elsewhere in the 
swollen river
'gator tails go thrashing
Water may be stagnant 
or it may be thus moving

Sometimes softly 
dripping
at times forcefully 
gushing
In brooks babbling
In streams gurgling
In springs bubbling
In rivers running

From faucets freely 
flowing
or from pipes coercingly 
spurting
At times noisily sloshing
But in lakes musically 
rippling

In it diving and wading
In it refreshing bathing
Or spic and span 
cleansing, rinsing
In it slow sailing or 
speedy surfing
Fishermen fishing or 
busy boating

Ah water, through cracks 
seeping
From waterfalls 
cascading
As rainwater splattering
From sprinklers 
sprinkling.
From hoses spattering
From rooftops streaming.

In whirlpools swiftly 
swirling
From taps simply trickling
Elsewhere rushing, 
whooshing

Ah yes water is life, 
water tis a böon
except when it goes 
flooding, drowning
or tsunami sea-quaking! 
Then only it becomes a 
bane
as it drags dreams and 
dreamers
down the drain! 

But oughtn't we be 
preserving
instead of forever 
polluting
This precious liquid so 
valuable to life
Oughtn't we be saving? 
Instead of negligent 
wasting?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lindley Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 8:21 PM
Brilliant point magnificently executed. Bravo!!
Murphy Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 7:51 AM
I enjoyed your poem immensely. And it is a shame to waste it. And water can be calming as you say or a disaster. Thank you for commenting on my poem. Enjoy your day!!
A  Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 9:25 AM
S Z K. , :) thank you for the wonderful winning poem. Enjoy your day. Love ~ SKAT~
Mehta Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 8:02 AM
wonderful and impressive write and congrats on the win, Zaynub
A  Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 1:20 PM
S Z K., , <3<3*CONGRATULATIONS, I THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST. Take care ~SKAT~
Harper Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 2:50 PM
S.zaynub, good use of contrasting ways we see water, good message and the end and good use of form. Congratulations on your win. Thanks much for entering my contest.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 8:06 AM
My fond tnx sheri 4 d win acknowldgment
Horne Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 1:12 PM
lovely write with a great message
Horsman Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 11:25 AM
very interesting poem,,such truth here,, well written,,enjoyed reading this...
Guzzi Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 11:02 AM
what a GOOD write it made me smile, people are not paying any attention in the western world we are so lucky. Yet, so many foolishly by bottled water!! They pay more per gallon of water than they do for gas and they don't realize fracking is polluting the water table for more oil? gas? fuel? Water is OUR primary fuel for life! Light & Love
Dunn Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 6:44 PM
ALSO WANTED TO SAY MERRY CHRISTMAS IT MAY BE LATE BUT I HAVE NOT BEEN WELL. STILL IT IS HEART FELT WELL
Dunn Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 6:43 PM
I feel this write as though i were at home by the water i miss so much, wading into the wet warm oregon waters with my toes emersed in the sand. i grew up here the wind rushing against the shore, and hearing the ship horns off in the distance. loved this very much. thank you cheri
A   Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 5:46 PM
S. Z.... Hope you had a wonderful Christmas with the family. This is very deep and moving... Like the epic line... Drag dreams and dreamers down the drain.. <--- Awesome alliterated line... (9 soup mail)) LINDA
Goller Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 1:25 PM
Without water there be no life, A very heartfelt expressed poem,nice rhyme and flow,I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Erich
Roberts Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 11:44 AM
waters' mobility leading to its importance well constructed nice finale Mkie
Nair Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 9:53 PM
Thnx for your visit, friend. I liked your poem very much..its theme, the imagery, the vocabulary were all excellent!!
J.T. Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 9:52 PM
Nicely done. Sounds very Dr. Seuss inspired. Good job
De Paz Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 10:42 AM
well done! I love water and here it flows so easily! Thank you for writing this beautyful poem
Morgan Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 9:43 AM
It's beautiful! I love the way you gave life to the poem, well done! Merry Christmas
Beam Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Tis the season of giving and thanks for sharing. I enjoyed your poem and I really like the Flow :) Merry Christmas
Alsaidi Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 7:12 AM
Beautiful, poem! It flows smoothly , just like water. It is good to stop sometimes and speculate on the essential things in life,,, giving them personality like you did. I salute your poetic soul.....Shams
Mehta Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 7:10 AM
I agree, water is life, Zaynub
Fraser Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 6:19 AM
A great poem about our greatest resource which we all take for granted. You have covered so many uses here, very well done. Merry Christmas, Carl
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