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Waterfalls and Rainbows

Alone on the fell, Skylarks are singing, Serenading me A tear in my eye, A moment of bliss. Majestic peaks Shrouded in cloud, Cascading streams Weep from their slopes. Thundering Waterfalls, Bring rainbows. Mountains Inspire, Me. Entry for Any Theme Diminished Hexaverse Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 26/1/19. Placed 2nd.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2019 3:28:00 PM

this is REALLY good writing, Gary. Love it. Congrats for your win.

Gary Smith
Date: 1/27/2019 3:30:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/27/2019 8:55:00 AM

Great job on this form, Gary. Love the poem and the part "Cascading streams weep from their slopes" Awesome! Congratulations on your 2nd place win. All the best, Charlie

Gary Smith
Date: 1/27/2019 8:59:00 AM

Thank you Charlie. :)

Wendy Watson

Date: 1/26/2019 1:43:00 PM

What a glorious description,Gary. Sadly, I have never had the privilege of such a view but your poetry gives me a beautiful flavour.

Gary Smith
Date: 1/26/2019 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Wendy. :)