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Waterfall Haiku

Blue moon lights the falls
cool vapors fill the night air
shushing me to sleep

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Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/27/2009 1:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/24/2009 8:25:00 PM

Dear Trudy, Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win in Raul's Contest What an Excellent Haiku It's "Shushing me to sleep" also Awesome Write Thank-YOU for YOUR many Gracious Comments ALWAYS YOURS.... HG

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/23/2009 4:39:00 AM

Congratulations, Trudy, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/21/2009 6:56:00 PM

congrats! Trudy! I really enjoyed this fine haiku! jim

Marty Owens

Date: 10/19/2009 10:03:00 AM

Very nice...Congratulations on win...Glad I didn't have to judge...Marty

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/19/2009 8:03:00 AM

I could hear the soothing sounds of those falls--what a soothing write! Congrats on your win!

Brian Strand

Date: 10/19/2009 12:48:00 AM

Nice one Trudy.Rgds Brian & thank you for your kind words today.

Ismael Nieves

Date: 10/18/2009 10:03:00 PM

Blue moon...cool vapors...shushing me to sleep. Very impressive! I must say. FELICITATIONS! on your win.

Adell Foster

Date: 10/18/2009 8:38:00 PM

This a very lovely read, Congrats on your sucess in Raul's contest :-) God Bless, Always, Adell

Danny Nunn

Date: 10/18/2009 4:35:00 PM

Nothing like the sounds of a water fall, good write....thanks for the congrats on my poem..Danny

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/17/2009 4:44:00 PM

Congratulations on placing in Raul's contest, Trudy. Well deserved! Love, Carolyn

Brian Strand

Date: 10/17/2009 2:22:00 AM

Congrats on your success in the contest Trudy.Rgds Brian

Elaine George

Date: 10/16/2009 8:17:00 PM

Dear Trudy, Congratulations on your beautiful Haiku win. Love, Lainie

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/16/2009 5:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your Win with this beautiful Haiku, Trudy! It paints such a lovely image! Love, Robin

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/16/2009 4:44:00 PM

There is a soft, gentle feel to this lovely poem! Congratulations on your win, Trudy!! ~ Love, Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/16/2009 3:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Trudy. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/16/2009 2:41:00 PM

Trudy, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

James Fraser

Date: 10/11/2009 1:51:00 PM

Delightful Haiku Trudy, i can picture me in a hammock in your poem >> best of luck in the contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/11/2009 12:26:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Trudy. Thank you for sharing it with us. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol

Date: 10/11/2009 12:06:00 PM

You have me smiling with your interesting perspective. I really like the opening line. Good luck in the contest. Karen

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/11/2009 11:39:00 AM

great entry! Trudy!... jim

Marty Owens

Date: 10/11/2009 11:15:00 AM

Oh wow...this is good. I'd hate to be the judge for this contest...there are so many good ones..I like "shushing me to sleep" Good luck in the contest.,,Marty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/11/2009 11:14:00 AM

Such cool and refreshing sounds would set the perfect state of mind to drift off to sleep. Beautiful imagery, Trudy! Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn