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Waterfall Haiku

Blue moon lights the falls cool vapors fill the night air shushing me to sleep

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Date: 10/27/2009 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest!
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Date: 10/24/2009 8:25:00 PM
Dear Trudy, Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win in Raul's Contest What an Excellent Haiku It's "Shushing me to sleep" also Awesome Write Thank-YOU for YOUR many Gracious Comments ALWAYS YOURS.... HG
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Date: 10/23/2009 4:39:00 AM
Congratulations, Trudy, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J
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Date: 10/21/2009 6:56:00 PM
congrats! Trudy! I really enjoyed this fine haiku! jim
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:03:00 AM
Very nice...Congratulations on win...Glad I didn't have to judge...Marty
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Date: 10/19/2009 8:03:00 AM
I could hear the soothing sounds of those falls--what a soothing write! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/19/2009 12:48:00 AM
Nice one Trudy.Rgds Brian & thank you for your kind words today.
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Date: 10/18/2009 10:03:00 PM
Blue moon...cool vapors...shushing me to sleep. Very impressive! I must say. FELICITATIONS! on your win.
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Date: 10/18/2009 8:38:00 PM
This a very lovely read, Congrats on your sucess in Raul's contest :-) God Bless, Always, Adell
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Date: 10/18/2009 4:35:00 PM
Nothing like the sounds of a water fall, good write....thanks for the congrats on my poem..Danny
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Date: 10/17/2009 4:44:00 PM
Congratulations on placing in Raul's contest, Trudy. Well deserved! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/17/2009 2:22:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the contest Trudy.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/16/2009 8:17:00 PM
Dear Trudy, Congratulations on your beautiful Haiku win. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/16/2009 5:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your Win with this beautiful Haiku, Trudy! It paints such a lovely image! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/16/2009 4:44:00 PM
There is a soft, gentle feel to this lovely poem! Congratulations on your win, Trudy!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Trudy. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2009 2:41:00 PM
Trudy, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 10/11/2009 1:51:00 PM
Delightful Haiku Trudy, i can picture me in a hammock in your poem >> best of luck in the contest >> James
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Date: 10/11/2009 12:26:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku Trudy. Thank you for sharing it with us. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2009 12:06:00 PM
You have me smiling with your interesting perspective. I really like the opening line. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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Date: 10/11/2009 11:39:00 AM
great entry! Trudy!... jim
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Date: 10/11/2009 11:15:00 AM
Oh wow...this is good. I'd hate to be the judge for this contest...there are so many good ones..I like "shushing me to sleep" Good luck in the contest.,,Marty
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Date: 10/11/2009 11:14:00 AM
Such cool and refreshing sounds would set the perfect state of mind to drift off to sleep. Beautiful imagery, Trudy! Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/11/2009 11:08:00 AM
Great Haiku almost went to sleep myself. Keep writing. Sara
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