Waterfall

Across the bridge and through the Glen
Past Mill on right, wheel stopped again
Trees are leaning on the slope
That they stay up that is my hope
Till I am past and on my way
Past bracken brown and grass like hay
There in the distance, silver and tall
Musically cascading the waterfall
I sit on rock and watch flow
That carved its way eons ago
And watered foliage in the Glen
Powered Mill wheel, stopped again
Through some unseen broken part
Deep in the Mills great grinding heart
Still onward flows the falls emission
Tween banks of green with people fishing
Till estuary at last gives way
To open sea where fish can play
And wind the moisture can lift high
To form great rain clouds in the sky
To feed the spring, that feeds the tall
Musically cascading waterfall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/5/2014 11:27:00 PM
This is awesome Bob :)
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 4/6/2014 5:56:00 AM
Thank you Debbie for your kind words. So glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 3/14/2014 1:05:00 AM
Once again Robert you have excelled yourself, that is beautiful and I just love the way you have Rhymed it.............Vera............
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 3/14/2014 2:57:00 PM
Thank you Vera for popping by with such kind words. We are never really very happy with our own work but it is nice to receive good comments. Thank you agai and regards to Peter. Andy
Date: 3/13/2014 3:52:00 PM
Beautiful imagery it reminds me of a glen here in the Isle of Man Jan xx
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 3/13/2014 4:11:00 PM
Thank you Jan for your kind words. Probably very much like Ireland over there. Sadly have never been there though probably passed by boat several times in my youth. Thank you again. Andy
Date: 3/13/2014 1:44:00 PM
This is lovely it painted the picture for me.
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 3/13/2014 2:26:00 PM
Thank you Louise for your kind words much appreciated. Andy
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