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Waterfall

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We languished near the cascading water Lush forests of birch, aspen and juniper grow A bridge spans across the stream, me and my daughter. Natural beauty I'm sure you'll easily recognize and know, A panoramic view, though in winter beware of the snow.

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/3/2021 5:07:00 AM

O' spill the beans O' Victor one, on where is this beautiful sight, your daughter and yourself must have a lovely time spanning the bridge and plondering on such beauty nature gives, blessed be the memories . . .

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/15/2021 7:03:00 PM

Beautiful brevity, such are the seasons in their changes. Enjoyed.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/28/2021 9:27:00 PM

Yes, the snow will cover the beauty, but it will bring back lush and beautiful.

Judy Ball

Date: 6/28/2021 12:45:00 PM

Beautiful Victor. Love the description her. It took me there. God Bless, JB

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/28/2021 9:19:00 AM

Lovely scene! Oh how poetry captures moments like a journal!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 6/28/2021 2:10:00 AM

Beautiful poem with lovely imagery and picture.. I hope you and your daughter had a good time... Sorry Victor...I have not been able to be active in Soup.. for some time now... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/27/2021 8:04:00 PM

I know of a place like this, in the autumn it's so colorful; in spring it's alive with verdant growth, such a setting any time of the year can be tranquil. Nicely penned.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2021 1:09:00 PM

very nice, my friend. I wonder what inspired this short poem! Did you write for this beautiful picture?

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/27/2021 11:23:00 AM

- Sounds like a wonderful place ... what a natural beauty, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/27/2021 10:15:00 AM

Picture perfect, Victor. It sure appears to have been a lovely day. :)

Jenna Logan

Date: 6/27/2021 10:00:00 AM

Such a lovely little lake/pond. A swim sounds fine. Nice one, Victor.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/27/2021 10:00:00 AM

A waterfall in the thick of summer, nothing more beautiful, You shar so well. :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/27/2021 8:45:00 AM

A lovely stroll with your daughter Victor, beautiful scenery painted for the readers with your poetic descriptive words… Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 6/27/2021 7:24:00 AM

delightful imagery Victor:-) hugs jan xx

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/27/2021 6:54:00 AM

Victor, your illustration is serene. I loved the trip in your waterfall color, sure you enjoyed being in the company of your daughter. Blessings and best wishes