Watercolors

Watercolor memories paint Enchanted mountains in my mind, And sunshine's glow upon my face Time to reflect and reacquaint With friends so treasured and kind, Reconnecting with God's grace I felt joy, I had no complaint With stars above I felt aligned Like a time traveller in space But time is not without constraint Thoughts of a love I left behind Beckoned me to a distant place To enchanted mountains, blue sky My saddened heart would say goodbye... 8-22- 2022 Trilonnet

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Valsa George

Date: 8/30/2022 6:44:00 AM

Simple and sweetly emotive. Mixing the shades of dark and light, you have created a soft hued painting in water colors ! Beautiful, dear friend Joseph .

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/26/2022 7:06:00 AM

This is a beautiful poem. A fave for me :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2022 1:46:00 PM

such melancholy. That ending. Wow. I just saw your triolet contest list. Thanks so much, and for your recent comments on my poems.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/22/2022 7:59:00 PM

I can understand painting those emotions with watercolors. Moments and feelings collide. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress softly around me. Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/22/2022 1:46:00 PM

I hear and feel the rhymes, Joseph. Awesome, meaningful write.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/22/2022 11:28:00 AM

Life is full of surprises, some god, some bad. A magnificent poem.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/22/2022 9:09:00 AM

A reflection of watercolor memories…very nice, Joseph!