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Water Tango

Surf utter with thunder Seaweed quiver in tears of salt Dancing under the moon

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P Sheart

Date: 10/4/2009 1:11:00 PM

Wow, two in semi's. Congrats on this amazing Haiku making it and good luck again in finals!! Love Light Truth Patty

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/30/2009 4:14:00 PM

The title is perfect for this wonderful Haiku, Laura! Congratulations again and good luck in the finals with both of your wonderful pieces! Love, Robin

Date: 9/26/2009 11:44:00 AM

Laura, just wanted to drop by and add this to my other two comments. Congratulations on having two poems make it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/25/2009 7:59:00 AM

Congrats to you dear Laura on your two amazing poems and good luck in the finals! love & miss you tons, shar xoxoxo

Elaine George

Date: 9/25/2009 4:34:00 AM

Dear Lauara. Best wishes through to the next round. Love, Lainie

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/24/2009 3:47:00 PM

Congratulations Laura..and good luck.with this wonderful haiku in the next round! ~ Love, Carrie

James Fraser

Date: 9/24/2009 12:23:00 PM

Laura, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2009 12:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your 2 poems making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Laura. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 9/24/2009 9:25:00 AM

Well done,Laura best wishes in the next rounds. with your poemsRgds Brian

Andrew Crisci

Date: 8/29/2009 9:08:00 AM

Hi, Laura! How are you doing.? I am doing great! I have gotten a response from The Poetry Soup Team. The situation has been sorted. Thanks for your sharp eye. Congratulations on your poem being futured this week. It is a lovely poem describing the turbulent sea, and like us, " The seaweeds quiver in tears of salt dancing under the moon." It's very inspiring and moving, if they could talk...many sea tales they would tell. Good luck with your great writing. Warmest Regards, Andrew.

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 8/29/2009 7:48:00 AM

This is a wonderful, awesome… poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great Laura! Adeleke

James Fraser

Date: 8/28/2009 5:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Laura>>James

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/24/2009 3:24:00 PM

Such a lovely haiku, Laura! Well deserving this featured week so more readers can enjoy!! Carrie

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 8/24/2009 12:35:00 PM

Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~

Krista Kurth

Date: 8/24/2009 7:56:00 AM

Laura, I love the image of dancing under the moon next to the ocean. I am working on a poem of a similar topic called Merenge Moon. Krista

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/24/2009 3:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Laura. Love, Carol

Diane Christian

Date: 8/24/2009 1:59:00 AM

congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane

Brian Strand

Date: 8/24/2009 12:10:00 AM

Congrats on your feature poem this week Laura.Rgds Brian

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 8/23/2009 11:17:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Laura. Congratulation on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda

Date: 8/23/2009 5:03:00 PM

Laura, just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to comment below. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Date: 4/17/2009 2:30:00 PM

The imagery seems to dance in this poem. I'm glad I ran across this one again. It certainly is worth more than one read. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/4/2009 8:15:00 AM

Marvelous word choices and stunning imagery! I like the assonance of 'utter/thunder' and your 's' alliteration. BRAVO Laura! Best wishes, Keith

Gene Williamson

Date: 4/3/2009 1:35:00 PM

I love the way you capture the surf as I know it, Laura. And thank you for the generous comment on my Spring Haiku. -gene.

Elaine George

Date: 4/2/2009 12:13:00 AM

wow!!!!! Llainie

Date: 3/30/2009 2:54:00 PM

Interesting use of imagery and personification in this poem. Enjoyed this! Thank you for the congrats. Karen