Water Serpents II, Gustav Klimt

I filled the night’s chalice
with knots of desire,
ribbons rinsed
with watered secrets
of the snake stars
I drank the charged blue
of the soul’s sapphire,
brushed the salt-laced air
between heartbeats
named the pining patterns
of crystal lanterns
      your sacred fire

and you drift beside me ~
femme fatale fantasies,
singing sweet, sepal soft odes
soothing aquatic angst
placing pink, perfumed petals
where I dream ~
promising I breathe nothing
but the pulse of paradise
untouched ~
as I slowly awaken
to the tulip tempest you’ve stirred
within me,
tongue-teasing
along your ring finger
while my nails roamed
the curves of your
contoured forearms,
learning the lion-mane lines
above your merlot veins
like redolent rain
thirsting to taste
the electrified essence
of your liquid lyrics
rushing restlessly
upon my rose-moon reveries

O, magnetic charmer
at the mercy of your
white-magic spell
even an incubus
shall hide in shame,
forgetting tricks to tempt
the timeless trinkets
awaiting to be traced ~
Oh, how I tremble
at the mere thought
of having love’s floral thunder
enthrall and excite me
in tremors of rolling silence
for I need you more than
the wanting waves
aching to
wash over the sands

I am the sighing sonnet
only the sea-wilderness
within the island
of your gaze can read ~
a mermaid mystery
marked with tides of truth…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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M  Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 5:41 AM
Belated Congratulations sweet Ink on receiving POTD! Debx
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 10:50 AM
Such a sensual poem. As always, too many awesome alliterations to name but they come together to weave such beauty. I'm seeing this was a POTD. Belated congrats
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 10:50 AM
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MITRA Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 8:42 PM
✨O Ink, thy quill through unimagined chromatic deeps doth drink the aureate, opaline, and star-born hues no mortal thought could name, then from black wells of night, in prismatic overflow, doth sink its secret tinctures through the void, till darkness kindleth into flame; paint on, and let thy fathomless iridescence ascend beyond the bright— till even the heavens seem but pigments in thy hand of light.✨
Rodgers Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 8:33 AM
Dear Empress, Oh a POTD that is exquisitely rich, sensory masterpiece of visual and lyrical art! Translating Gustav Klimt’s Water Serpents II into verse is no small feat. What makes the poem so hypnotic is how it balances that dreamy, aquatic tranquility with an electric undercurrent of desire. The shift from "soothing aquatic angst" to being spellbound by a "tulip tempest" creates a magnificent, rolling tide through the middle of the poem. Another Empress breathtaking, spellbinding, and truly painterly FAV poem! Blessings, Daniel
Messina Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 3:28 AM
WOW- I.E. this is written so well. Belated Congrats on your POTD! You have a knack for writing dear friend. Keep the ink flowing :)
G  Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 11:55 PM
Congratulations podium buddy - we're clinking champagne flutes again 🥂
Goldsmith Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 11:43 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write/story. Sorry I am late but yesterday I was off the computer. Have a blessed day/week with your wonderful win...............
Sharma  Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 12:44 AM
Again, "love's floral thunder" okayyy, hellowwww?? How many feathery-thistle word pairings do u have? Well, I am not surprised because you always surprise me hahahahahha 🙀😻😹 I hope I am making sense lol ... Congratulations, a big CONGRATULATIONS my poetic guardian angel u rawwwwkkk alwaayzzzz Huggssszzzz A FAVE OFCOURSE Mermaid moonbeams and hummingbird hugsss lol 🧜‍♀️ 🧚‍♀️ 🌊 🏝️ 💫 💃 💋
Sharma  Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 12:41 AM
For me, especially i ADORE that opening stanza with all the sapphiresss and bluesss! Ah magnetic and electric all the way throughout.. also "snake stars" WOWWZERSSs! You really left no crumbs here and I am awestruck by the sound of the words that you've inked, the way they give off a very enchanting energy when read aloud ...ooofffff 😱 💎 🫂 💫 "O, magnetic charmer at the mercy of your white-magic spell even an incubus shall hide in shame, forgetting tricks to tempt the timeless trinkets"
Sharma  Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 12:39 AM
A mermaid mystery marked with tides of truth! GOSHHH! Now that's a POTD that I loveeeeeee to seeeeeee! Amazing Amazing amazing! What a truly magnificent romantic piece that is, so lusciously layered with the lore of love and longing ahhhhh, my heart 😩🤌🏻💫🌙 The mermaid mystery that you are! And the island of affection ahhhh! So much sweetnessszzzzz here I can't even begin to describe, ah also the sensuality that flows throughout is jusss 😶‍🌫️🫣 you really are a word wizard! And any muse with lion-mane lines must and shud be so proud!
Hind Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 8:11 PM
warmest congrats on POTD, Ink <3
Nicole Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 8:10 PM
' I am the sighing sonnet only your gaze can read. ' Dearest Inky, I placed this thought together because it is beyond brilliant and it creates a breathtaking moment. So many different moments and emotions tangle within, my dear friend. You truly are an artist with your words. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you, always. Hugs, Brandy
Alex Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 7:34 PM
Your poem translates the swirling, sensual, and fluid aesthetics of Gustav Klimt’s 1907 masterpiece, Water Serpents II, into textual imagery. Congratulations!
Empress Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 1:40 AM
Thank you so much dear Christuraj! I appreciate you noticing that it aligns with the art. Sending you light always
Jama Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 5:54 PM
Congratulations on receiving POTD for this sensually saucy write Ink. 😱🔥
Empress Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 1:39 AM
Hahah thank you so much my sister from the same after life! I am grateful for your visit! This poem has too much flavor yes haha 😂 sending you light always
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 9:38 AM
Back to write congratulations on your very nice POTD! Have a nice day ~ AA
Empress Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 10:22 AM
Thank you kind AA, appreciate your revisit ~ Sending you light today and always 💫🌙
Wolf Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 9:12 AM
The 'tulip tempest' within you stirs the pot here with every poem you post. Congrats on POTD. ~ Gershon
Empress Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 10:23 AM
Lol thank you for reading and for pointing that out. I tried not stirring too much, appreciate your support dear GW. Sending you light always ~
La France Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 7:04 AM
Ink, beautifully penned and congratulations on receiving the POTD honor ⭐
Empress Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 10:25 AM
Awwn thank you beautiful Warrior poetess. Sending you light today and always 💫 🌙 💋
Liguori Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 6:53 AM
This poem is smokin’!!! I had to put the air conditioner on low after reading this cause it’s so darn hot. Your poetry writing skills are wide ranging… never stop making us smile!! Congratulations on POTD.
Empress Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 10:27 AM
Lolol wide ranging! Thats news! Thank you dear Robert! Appreciate your bravery ~ commenting on this 🥹 Its all about my mood! Sending you light always 💫 dont read this to stella! 🤫
Gibbons Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 6:27 AM
Wooo hooo a well deserved POTD back to say big congratulations you rock chic ✍️✨️🧜‍♀️🧜‍♀️🧜‍♀️🦄🦄🦄♥️💋🫂🎶🎵🎶🎵 so talented so full of love n inspiration treasure our friendship my dearest empress of ink so proud of you 👏👏hugzzz from my heart ♥️to your heart ♥️😎
Empress Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 10:38 AM
My heart felt your warm hug Unicorn star ~ thank you so much for the fave and revisit and for being here. Appreciate your energy! Its always vibrant! Sending you light always 🧜‍♀️🦄
Kitchin Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 5:56 AM
Ink, a beautifully penned enchantingly romantic poem. Congratulations on POTD.
Empress Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 10:44 AM
Thank you so much dear Tania, appreciate your warm presence. Sending you light always 💫 🌙
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 4:56 AM
Back with congratulations on your (hot) and well deserved POTD Ink, (a tonic for the troops) cheers David!
Empress Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 10:46 AM
“ tonic for the troops” haha made me smile! Lolol thank you for fearlessly supporting the unfathomable heat today! Lol appreciate your kindness dear David. Sending you light always ~
Smith  Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 4:12 AM
This is a stunning ekphrastic piece that beautifully captures the sensual, hypnotic energy of Klimt’s painting. The fluid structure of the poem—with its drifting indents, seamless enjambment, and soft pauses—perfectly mirrors the aquatic, intertwining movement of water serpents. Additionally, the lush, rhythmic alliteration ("singing sweet, sepal soft," "tulip tempest") pairs exceptionally well with the rich, sensory color palette of "sapphire" and "merlot," creating an intoxicating and deeply immersive reading experience. Congratulations on POTD
Empress Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 10:48 AM
Your comments are so very detailed. I appreciate your presence and your support ~ thank you so much kind soul. Sending you light always ~ 🧜‍♀️ 💫
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 4:12 AM
liked the phrase 'tides of truth.' congrats on your POTD designation.
Empress Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 10:49 AM
Thank you for pointing it out dear Sara. Hope you and Bill are doing well. Sending you light always ~ 💫
DiMino Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 4:04 AM
Beautiful poetic language, very nicely done. Well deserving your POTD. Congratulations!
Empress Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 11:28 AM
Thank you so much dear Jo. I appreciate your support. Sending you light always 💫🌙
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