Karen Jones Poet Acrostic

Water Lily

Weeping willow creeping there
Amber light from melodic moon
Take a fuchsia flower for hair
Emerald embrace as love bloom
Romantic rose petals on blanket
Laid so beautifully 
Indigo kiss touches silver soul passion strategically 
Like lily floating in the lake
Your love does the same to me

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Joseph May August 15, 2024 at 7:02 PM Very nicely penned Karen, enjoyed Karen Jones August 15, 2024 at 8:59 PM Thanks Joe!

Duke Beaufort August 10, 2024 at 11:55 AM Karen, this has a subtle poetic quality that makes it all work really well. Smiles!! Karen Jones August 10, 2024 at 12:14 PM Glad you like it! Hugs

I Am Anaya August 8, 2024 at 8:25 PM It feels like a treasure chest filled with goodies, a beautiful state of mind to be in, Karen. This is lovejoy! xo Karen Jones August 8, 2024 at 8:43 PM Hugs Anaya!

Mike Gentile August 8, 2024 at 4:26 AM So romantic and beautifully crafted Karen! I really enjoyed reading it this morning!! Happy Thursday !! Karen Jones August 8, 2024 at 6:11 AM Happy Thursday and thanks Mike!

Hilda Greenhough August 7, 2024 at 8:20 PM This is a beautiful poem. I like the comparison between the lily and his love. Karen Jones August 8, 2024 at 12:24 AM Hilda thank you for reading so many of my poems!

Jan Allison August 7, 2024 at 3:20 PM what a delight to read karen! hugs jan xx Karen Jones August 7, 2024 at 4:28 PM Thanks Jan!

Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2024 at 12:06 PM this is so lovely, Karen. Great job. Karen Jones August 7, 2024 at 12:16 PM Aw you are kind thanks Andrea!

Victor Buhagiar August 7, 2024 at 8:36 AM A brilliant acrostic. I love water lilies though you won;t many in Malta. Karen Jones August 7, 2024 at 9:31 AM Thanks Victor!

Silent One August 7, 2024 at 2:51 AM Sweet analogy.. nice acrostic and arrangement of words.. Karen Jones August 7, 2024 at 3:26 AM Thanks Silent One!

Valsa George August 6, 2024 at 9:45 PM Beautiful analogy between love and water lily floating in the lake. Let love bloom. Karen Jones August 6, 2024 at 11:11 PM Thanks Valsa for reading.