Water From the Stream

I remember the cabin by the lake in the wood
and Grandma giving us buckets, telling us we should
walk up the creek to get some water from the stream.
Remembering it now is almost like a dream.

No electricity, no plumbing, no water at hand
but we thought it the prettiest place in the land.
In spring we got water not far from the door.
As summer progressed we had to walk a little more.

By August the spring barely flowed at all
so we'd follow the stream, though we were quite small.
Alone in the woods with a bucket each,
following that creek 'til a pool we'd reach.

Filling the buckets, then back down the hill.
This was our chore, I remember it still.
We'd pick wild flowers and try to catch frogs,
taking too long as we walked along logs.

Every morning two buckets of water we brought.
These were for drinking, lake water was not.
Lake water was boiled and used for cleaning up.
The only one who drank it was the cocker spaniel pup.

The stream was the run-off from melted snow.
Down the mountain it ran, to the lake below.
Fast and furious , the winter through
but gentle and quiet by summer it grew.

The cabins at the lake are updated now
with electricity and plumbing but I remember how
two eight year old girls went for water each day.
Their chore done before they headed off to play. 




~~~Francine Roberts~~~
        04/06/2011

for Constance's 'Write Me a rippling Stream'
         contest
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Brown Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 9:42 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Francine. Love, Carol
Wesley Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 6:10 PM
A lovely poem, enjoyed reading as it took me back to my childhood.
Onclaud Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 1:32 AM
a glorious write, francine! winning cheers to you for the glowing win! :) huggs
Mehta Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 9:12 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Francine
Dailey Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 7:13 AM
What a beautiful picture and memory. Custom made for a winning entry in this contest. Mike
Mannan Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 6:48 AM
As I said on fb, this is super lovely. many congrats Francine.
Poet Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 6:40 AM
Very nice descriptive write Francine..Congrats on your win.
Onclaud Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 9:51 PM
undulating, francine..best congrats on the fine win,,:) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 8:37 PM
Congrats Francine on your wonderful win in Constance's contest with this splendid write ..enjoy with luv...
La France Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 7:33 PM
Congratulations, Francine, on your shared 3rd place in my Rippling Stream Contest with this beautiful and lovely poem~
Horne Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 11:49 AM
Thanks, Francine : ) I read the rules several times before posting that one!
Taylor Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 6:54 PM
Great Write. Loved it. Absolutely incredible work. I look forward to reading more of you because of this piece. Outstanding Job.
Horne Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 1:58 PM
Lovely write, Francine. Oops - sorry, I didn't see the minimum length LOL
A  Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 1:24 PM
good luck in contest too
A  Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 1:23 PM
great write on a great memory Luv*Skat
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June 4, 2011 at 12:06 PM
Wow! I felt like I was walking along with you, frolicking with the frogs and picking the wildflowers. Your poem makes me wish we could return to these simpler days, Francine. So incredibly beautifully written! Surely a winner! Glad you enjoyed the Golden Girls. I had a blast writing it. I guess a sequel with the James Brothers might be in order. Bob Hinshaw and Ralph Taylor want to be at the table next to us. Love, Carolyn
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