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Water Falling Sweet



water falling sweet
as pure as eternal love
the circle of life



for John's contest

faithinspirationalhaiku

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2011 11:53:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this testimony of your faith..Sara

Sunflower Poetess

Date: 7/10/2011 2:38:00 AM

Barbara, Congratulations on your win in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Wonderful write on the image presented. Love, Glenna

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/9/2011 10:24:00 PM

oh barbara...swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/9/2011 9:00:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS! great win ...*-*junjun

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/9/2011 5:57:00 PM

nice write for John, I'm sure he will appreciate it! Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2011 3:51:00 PM

Congrats BG on your fantastic win with this brilliant beauty luv.. super words...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/9/2011 12:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Barbara in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 7/9/2011 11:45:00 AM

Great title Barbara-Congrats to you :)

Kash Poet

Date: 7/9/2011 10:30:00 AM

Congrats Barbara on your win...enjoyed your beautiful Haiku.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/9/2011 9:10:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, barbara

John Freeman

Date: 7/9/2011 9:09:00 AM

Barbara, Great life precept, Congratulations, Thanks for support of this effort. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

Date: 7/9/2011 8:54:00 AM

Many congrats, Barbara : )

James Fraser

Date: 7/7/2011 10:28:00 AM

The sweet water of nature captured so splendidly in this fine Haiku. Good luck in John's contest Barbara :)

James Fraser
Date: 7/7/2011 10:31:00 AM

Hi Barbara, I'm very well, and I trust you are also. If you copy and paste the link below, you will see who my poem "The Day we Finally Met" is about. http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/lorena.php

Lisa Cooper

Date: 7/1/2011 9:19:00 PM

great write

Date: 7/1/2011 4:36:00 PM

What an inspirational poem. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great weekend. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/1/2011 12:26:00 PM

Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Barbara. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend and that you find miles of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Jancarl Campi

Date: 7/1/2011 2:23:00 AM

I like the sounds here.Good luck! Jancarl