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Water did fall

In the water falls
in their nakedness they kissed
a splash and locked lips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 1/18/2010 8:00:00 AM
oh my goodness! were you watching? LOL just teasing. great haiku! thanks for your lovely comment. my little poem a true but brief story about my artist husband and myself : )). have a great day! love, shar
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Date: 7/26/2009 5:14:00 PM that all??? Hugs Light & Love
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Date: 7/6/2009 4:08:00 PM
This sounds like a romantic escapade. I like the imagery of the waterfall. This is like magic. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 6/18/2009 2:07:00 AM
For Dreamy And hott<3
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Date: 6/16/2009 9:35:00 PM
When do they come up for air ... don't waterfalls breathe too? Great write again
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Date: 6/13/2009 3:52:00 PM
PASSION--i saw them kissing too under the beautiful water fall--in their nakedness--in their pure love,pure wanting---this goes to my favs cos it is awesome--YF--charma
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Date: 6/12/2009 10:19:00 AM
The erotic play of the waterfalls, love the sounds and the feel on the skin. Great write!
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